Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Faut que tu fais attention à la grammaire pis la clarté. Par exemple, "I couldn't get anything forget" est pas correct. Aussi, évite les répétitions pis essaie d'être plus clair dans tes phrases.

예시: Yes, I have a good memory because I keep my things organized. Sometimes, I take notes to make sure I don't forget anything. Also, I believe it's important to refocus to remember important details.

제안: Faut que tu travailles sur la fluidité pis évite les hésitations comme "uh". Aussi, fais attention à la structure des phrases, par exemple "I was in rush" devrait être "I was in a rush".

예시: Yes, one year ago, I had a joint interview at Taylor's company. I was in a rush to get there by 8:00 AM, but then I realized I forgot my identification card at home, so I had to go back to get it.

제안: Faut que tu évites les mots mal utilisés comme "pleurithora" (correct: plethora). Aussi, complète tes phrases pour qu'elles soient complètes et claires, pis évite les répétitions comme "to to".

예시: There are many things I need to remember daily. For example, I travel every day, so I always need my cell phone to explore new locations and stay connected.

제안: Faut que tu améliores la fluidité en évitant les répétitions comme "sometimes I take notes" deux fois. Aussi, fais attention à la grammaire, par exemple "whenever it's the task time come" devrait être "whenever the task time comes".

예시: I use a reminder app on my phone to keep track of important tasks. When the time comes, the app alerts me. Besides that, I sometimes take notes to help me remember things.

× Sometimes I take notes that I couldn't get anything forget.

✓ Sometimes I take notes so that I don't forget anything.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'couldn't get anything forget', which is ungrammatical. The correct form is to use 'so that I don't forget anything' to express purpose and negation properly.

× Moreover, I believe that you have to refocus to not to forget anything.

✓ Moreover, I believe that you have to refocus so as not to forget anything.

The phrase 'to not to forget' is incorrect due to the double 'to'. The correct expression is 'so as not to forget' to indicate purpose without redundancy.

× I remember that one year ago I had an joint interview at Taylor's company.

✓ I remember that one year ago I had a joint interview at Taylor's company.

The article 'an' is used before vowel sounds, but 'joint' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a' is the correct article.

× I was in rush.

✓ I was in a rush.

The phrase 'in rush' is missing the indefinite article 'a'. The correct expression is 'in a rush'.

× I was uh, going to the company around 8:00 AM Then I realized that I forgot my uh, identification card at home, so I went back to home and then.

✓ I was, uh, going to the company around 8:00 AM. Then I realized that I forgot my, uh, identification card at home, so I went back home and then.

The phrase 'went back to home' is incorrect; 'home' as an adverb does not require 'to'. Also, punctuation is added for clarity.

× Well, there are pleurithora of things that I have to remember in my day-to-day life.

✓ Well, there is a plethora of things that I have to remember in my day-to-day life.

The word 'pleurithora' is a misspelling of 'plethora'. Also, 'plethora' is singular, so it should be 'there is a plethora'.

× First of all, I travel every day, so I always need my cell phone which I can use to to explore new locations moreover.

✓ First of all, I travel every day, so I always need my cell phone which I can use to explore new locations. Moreover,

The phrase 'to to explore' has a repeated 'to'. Also, 'moreover' should start a new sentence or clause, not be at the end.

× I have installed a reminder app in my cell phone.

✓ I have installed a reminder app on my cell phone.

The correct preposition with 'installed' and 'cell phone' is 'on', not 'in'.

× I always put a task on the reminder app and whenever it's the task time come, it always gives me an alarm.

✓ I always put a task on the reminder app, and whenever the task time comes, it always gives me an alarm.

The phrase 'whenever it's the task time come' is ungrammatical. It should be 'whenever the task time comes' with correct subject-verb agreement and word order.

× Apart from this I sometimes I take notes to remember things.

✓ Apart from this, I sometimes take notes to remember things.

The sentence has a redundant 'I' and missing comma after 'Apart from this'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.