Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够流畅，存在语法错误和重复，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和表达。

예시: I am not very good at memorising things. For example, just a few minutes ago, I put my books on the desk and immediately forgot about them.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, definitely. In the last two months, I visited Dalian and unfortunately lost my credit card there, which made me feel very embarrassed.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用不当。建议简化表达，明确主题句，并用具体细节支持。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember how to plan my meals properly. For example, I make sure to balance my intake of proteins and carbohydrates.

제안: 回答较为完整，但存在重复和语法错误。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词。

예시: Since I sometimes forget things, I usually take notes on my mobile phone. Additionally, I ask my girlfriend to remind me of important tasks.

× maybe last minutes I've I put the books on the on the desk and the next minute I forget it.

✓ Maybe last minute I put the books on the desk and the next minute I forgot it.

这里涉及过去时态的使用。'I've I put' 是错误的表达，应为简单过去时 'I put'。'forget' 应改为过去式 'forgot'，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。建议使用简单过去时描述过去的动作。

× And the in in the last two months and I visited Dalian and I lost my credit card in in this place.

✓ In the last two months, I visited Dalian and lost my credit card in that place.

句子中 'And the in in the last two months and I visited' 结构混乱，应简化为 'In the last two months, I visited'。'lost' 是过去式，正确使用。建议去除多余的连词和重复词，使句子更通顺。

× I lost my credit card in in this place.

✓ I lost my credit card in this place.

'in in' 是重复使用介词，应去掉一个。介词 'in' 用于表示地点，使用正确，但重复错误。建议注意避免重复介词。

× I will require my girlfriend to help me to remember things.

✓ I will ask my girlfriend to help me remember things.

'require' 用法不当，通常用于正式或法律语境，日常表达中应使用 'ask'。此外，'help me to remember' 中 'to' 可省略，'help' 后接动词原形。建议使用更自然的表达方式。