Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时句子结构较为混乱，表达不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things for a long time, such as long essays. However, I have a strong short-term memory and can remember to-do lists or shopping lists without writing them down.

제안: 回答内容具体，但部分表达不清晰，如“we sat with Chinese”不明所以。建议使用更准确的表达，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot my friend's birthday because in Chinese culture, birthdays are based on the lunar calendar, which differs from the regular calendar we use daily. Therefore, the date changes every year.

제안: 回答较为完整，内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。注意“earphone”应为复数形式“earphones”。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my parents' and friends' birthdays, and I also keep track of important meetings at work. Additionally, I always make sure to take my keys and earphones when I go out.

제안: 回答内容清晰，但表达略显重复，且“organize to my time”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

예시: I usually set reminders on my phone because it's very convenient and I can do it anytime, anywhere. For instance, if I have an important meeting, I set a reminder on my calendar so that I won't miss it and can manage my time effectively.

× I'm not very good at memorizing things for a long time, like reciting a long essay, but I have a strong short term memory I can keep I guess A to do list or shopping list in mind without writing it down and I really forget important tasks.

✓ I'm not very good at memorizing things for a long time, like reciting a long essay, but I have a strong short-term memory. I can keep, I guess, a to-do list or shopping list in mind without writing it down, and I rarely forget important tasks.

原句中缺少标点符号，导致句子结构混乱，影响理解。需要用逗号和句号分隔不同的意思，使句子更清晰。

× That's because we sat with Chinese. People celebrate birthdays based on lunar calendar, which is different from the normal calendar we use in daily life.

✓ That's because we are Chinese. People celebrate birthdays based on the lunar calendar, which is different from the normal calendar we use in daily life.

原句中“we sat with Chinese”用词错误，应为“we are Chinese”。另外，“based on lunar calendar”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“based on the lunar calendar”。

× People celebrate birthdays based on lunar calendar, which is different from the normal calendar we use in daily life.

✓ People celebrate birthdays based on the lunar calendar, which is different from the normal calendar we use in daily life.

“lunar calendar”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为这里指特定的农历，需加定冠词。

× In my daily life, I have to remember my parents and my friends birthdays and I also need to keep track of important meetings at work.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember my parents' and my friends' birthdays, and I also need to keep track of important meetings at work.

“parents and my friends birthdays”中“birthdays”应为复数，且“parents”和“friends”所有格应加撇号，表示所属关系。

× Additionally, I always make sure to take my keys and earphone when I go out.

✓ Additionally, I always make sure to take my keys and earphones when I go out.

“earphone”应使用复数形式“earphones”，因为通常指一对耳机。

× For example, if I have an important meeting, I would just set a reminder on my calendar so that I won't miss out and I can organize to my time effectively.

✓ For example, if I have an important meeting, I just set a reminder on my calendar so that I won't miss it and I can organize my time effectively.

“would just set”在此处不合适，因条件句表达习惯用一般现在时；“miss out”应为“miss it”；“organize to my time”中“to”多余，应为“organize my time”。