Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免重复表达，同时使句子更简洁自然。

예시: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially numbers. For example, when I was young, I found math problems involving numbers very difficult because I wasn't sensitive to numbers. Therefore, remembering numbers has always been a challenge for me.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复和口语化表达，使内容更连贯。

예시: Yes, once I forgot about my final exam, which made me very scared. I don't know why I forgot it because it was very important. Missing the exam could have affected my future skills and life. Fortunately, I remembered it in time, so it wasn't a big problem.

제안: 回答表达了主要意思，但用词不准确（如'classic'应为'class'），句子结构需改进。建议使用正确词汇并简化句子，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: As a student, I need to remember my class schedule and attend classes on time. Sometimes I forget, so I put reminders on my phone screen to help me remember to go to school punctually.

제안: 回答内容清晰，但表达略显重复和不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Usually, I remind myself several times about important tasks. If something is really important, I set alarms and put reminders on my phone to make sure I don't forget and can act on time.

× I'm not good at memory things, specially for the numbers.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things, especially numbers.

这里“memory things”用法不正确，应该用动名词“memorising things”表示记忆事物；“specially”应为“especially”，表示特别。

× when I was young I really do some mice problems and the numbers problem is very hard for me

✓ when I was young I really did some math problems and the numbers problem was very hard for me

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去式，“do”改为“did”；“mice problems”应为“math problems”（推测为数学题），“is”改为“was”，因为描述过去的情况。

× because I'm not sensitive to the numbers.

✓ because I'm not good at numbers.

“sensitive to the numbers”用法不当，表达不擅长数字应使用“good at numbers”。

× I almost scared about that.

✓ I was almost scared about that.

“scared”是形容词，前面需要有系动词“was”；“about”用法正确。

× I don't know why I'm forget about that.

✓ I don't know why I forgot about that.

“I'm forget”错误，应该用过去式“forgot”；“I'm”是“我现在是”，与动词时态不符。

× If I didn't want to do final exam, I will get no skill.

✓ If I didn't want to do the final exam, I would get no skill.

条件句中时态和语气不匹配，应使用虚拟语气“would”；“final exam”前应加定冠词“the”。

× I really scared about that.

✓ I was really scared about that.

“scared”是形容词，前面需要系动词“was”。

× But finally I catch that.

✓ But finally I caught that.

描述过去事件，动词应使用过去式“caught”。

× I'm still a student now, so I have to remember my classic schedule.

✓ I'm still a student now, so I have to remember my class schedule.

“classic schedule”用词错误，应为“class schedule”（课程表）。

× I have to go to the classic on time,

✓ I have to go to class on time,

“go to the classic”错误，应为“go to class”，表示去上课。

× sometimes I make some mistake about that

✓ sometimes I make some mistakes about that

“some mistake”应为复数“some mistakes”，表示多个错误。

× so I have to put them on my phone screen so that attention me to go to school on time.

✓ so I have to put them on my phone screen so that it reminds me to go to school on time.

“attention me”用法错误，应为“it reminds me”，表示提醒我。

× Normally I will tell myself lots of time you need to do something on some time.

✓ Normally I will tell myself many times that I need to do something at a certain time.

“lots of time”应为“many times”，表示多次；“on some time”应为“at a certain time”，表示在某个时间。

× And if it's really important I will set some alarms to make me know it's time to go to do something.

✓ And if it's really important I will set some alarms to let me know it's time to do something.

“make me know”用法不当，应为“let me know”，表示让某人知道。

× And I will also put them on my phone to make me know, oh, it's time, let's go.

✓ And I will also put them on my phone to let me know, oh, it's time, let's go.

同上，“make me know”应改为“let me know”。