Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连词连接细节，使表达更流畅。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. However, I try to improve by taking notes on my phone and asking my friends to remind me of important matters.

제안: 回答中语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用连词清楚地说明原因和例子。

예시: I haven't forgotten anything important because I set reminders on my phone. However, I have seen my friends forget important things sometimes.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和表达有误。建议注意句子结构，使用连词使内容更连贯。

예시: I need to remember many things daily. For instance, I have appointments with friends to go to restaurants on weekends, and I also have important work meetings to attend.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达策略，并用连词连接细节。

예시: I use several strategies to remember important things. For example, I set reminders on my phone to reduce the chance of forgetting tasks, and I also ask my friends to remind me when necessary.

× No, not really, but I try to keep memorizing things, umm by myself.

✓ No, not really, but I try to keep memorizing things by myself.

句中“keep memorizing things”中的“keep”后面应直接跟动名词形式，原句中“umm”是口语填充词，应去除以使句子更流畅。

× For example, I will I take notes on my apps or I just ask my friends to help me or to remind me something important.

✓ For example, I take notes on my apps or just ask my friends to help me or remind me of something important.

原句中“will I take”结构错误，应去掉“will”；“to remind me something important”中“remind”后应接介词“of”，构成固定搭配“remind me of something”。

× No I haven't because I usually keep important things on my phone to remind me of them so I barely have opportunities to forget them but I do.

✓ No, I haven't because I usually keep important things on my phone to remind me of them, so I rarely have opportunities to forget them, but I do sometimes.

原句缺少逗号分隔复合句，且“barely have opportunities”表达不自然，改为“rarely have opportunities”更合适；“but I do”后应补充“sometimes”使句意完整。

× But I have seen my one of my friends.

✓ But I have seen one of my friends.

“my one of my friends”结构重复且错误，应去掉多余的“my”，正确表达为“one of my friends”。

× Wow, I have so many things need to remember.

✓ Wow, I have so many things to remember.

“things need to remember”缺少不定式“to”连接，正确表达为“things to remember”。

× For example, I have to remember appointments with my friends, we usually go to restaurants in on weekends.

✓ For example, I have to remember appointments with my friends; we usually go to restaurants on weekends.

“in on weekends”中“in”多余，应去掉；两个独立句子之间应使用分号或句号分隔。

× Besides that I have to remember the works meetings which is quite important.

✓ Besides that, I have to remember the work meetings which are quite important.

“works meetings”应为“work meetings”；“which is”指代复数“meetings”，应改为“which are”。

× Well, I actually use some of the strategies to help me remember important things.

✓ Well, I actually use some strategies to help me remember important things.

“some of the strategies”中“the”不必要，去掉更自然。

× For example, I set reminders on my phones and to keep to reduce the chance of forgetting important task.

✓ For example, I set reminders on my phone to reduce the chance of forgetting important tasks.

“phones”应为单数“phone”，因为通常指一个手机；“important task”应为复数“important tasks”；“and to keep”多余，应去掉。

× Besides that, I asked my friend to remind me of things that.

✓ Besides that, I ask my friend to remind me of things.

根据上下文，描述习惯动作应使用现在时，“asked”改为“ask”；句尾“that”多余，应去掉。