Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Améliorez la clarté et la fluidité de votre réponse en évitant les erreurs grammaticales et en structurant mieux vos phrases. Par exemple, évitez les répétitions inutiles et utilisez des phrases complètes et naturelles.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, just like my mom. I can easily remember important events, dates, and even small details related to special occasions.

제안: Pour améliorer, utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus cohérente et ajoutez des détails spécifiques pour enrichir votre réponse.

예시: Yes, during stressful periods, I often forget important details, such as dates and tasks I need to complete. This usually happens because I feel overwhelmed and tired.

제안: Votre réponse est incomplète et manque de clarté. Essayez de compléter vos phrases et d'utiliser des mots de liaison pour structurer votre réponse de manière plus naturelle.

예시: In my daily life, I rely on two main methods to remember important tasks. First, I ask my mom to remind me of things, and second, I write them down either on paper or on my phone.

제안: Améliorez la fluidité et la complétude de votre réponse en évitant les phrases inachevées et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour connecter vos idées.

예시: I usually use two methods to remember important things. First, I ask my mom to remind me of important tasks, and second, I write them down on paper or on my phone to keep track.

× Yes, I'm as my mom very good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I'm as good as my mom at memorizing things.

The phrase 'I'm as my mom very good' is incorrect because it misuses the pronoun and the comparative structure. The correct form is 'I'm as good as my mom' to compare abilities properly.

× When I live in a stressful period, I often forget some details, some dates and especially some tasks that I should do.

✓ When I lived in a stressful period, I often forgot some details, some dates and especially some tasks that I should do.

The sentence refers to a past experience, so the verb 'live' should be in the past tense 'lived' and 'forget' should be 'forgot' to maintain tense consistency.

× I actually depend on two things to keep myself remembering the important tasks in my daily life.

✓ I actually depend on two things to help me remember the important tasks in my daily life.

The phrase 'keep myself remembering' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'help me remember' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× The first one is asking my mom to Remember Me something or I write it down on a.

✓ The first one is asking my mom to remind me of something or I write it down on a paper.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'Remember Me' should be 'remind me of', and the sentence needs completion with 'paper' to make sense.

× I usually rely on 2 methods to remember important things.

✓ I usually rely on two methods to remember important things.

Numbers under ten should be written in words in formal writing, so '2' should be 'two'.

× First, I ask my mom to remind me things that I shouldn't forget and 2nd I write down on a paper or on my phone the tasks and.

✓ First, I ask my mom to remind me of things that I shouldn't forget, and second, I write down the tasks on paper or on my phone.

The phrase 'remind me things' is incorrect; it should be 'remind me of things'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs proper conjunction and completion for clarity.