Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use clearer sentence structures and correct article usage. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm'. For example, say 'I am quite good at memorizing things, especially those related to my daily life, such as my laptop, phone, and wallet, which are essential for my work. This skill helps me stay organized.'

예시: I am quite good at memorizing things, especially those related to my daily life, such as my laptop, phone, and wallet, which are essential for my work. This skill helps me stay organized.

제안: The answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and incomplete thoughts. Focus on clear, complete sentences and avoid repetition. For example, say 'Yes, last week I forgot my wallet when I went to the store. I felt very stressed because I couldn't pay for my belongings.'

예시: Yes, last week I forgot my wallet when I went to the store. I felt very stressed because I couldn't pay for my belongings.

제안: Good content but some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words and correct verb tenses. For example, say 'I think it's important to prepare my schedule before starting the day because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. By planning my activities in advance, I can avoid feeling stressed and overwhelmed. For example, when I have a clear plan, I am less likely to forget tasks.'

예시: I think it's important to prepare my schedule before starting the day because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. By planning my activities in advance, I can avoid feeling stressed and overwhelmed. For example, when I have a clear plan, I am less likely to forget tasks.

제안: Improve grammar and word choice for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'I usually write down essential tasks I need to complete each day, either on my phone or on sticky notes placed beside me. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.'

예시: I usually write down essential tasks I need to complete each day, either on my phone or on sticky notes placed beside me. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

× Well, yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things, particularly for a specific things relate to my daily life.

✓ Well, yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things, particularly for specific things related to my daily life.

The phrase 'a specific things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'relate' should be 'related' to correctly modify 'things'. The correction removes the article and changes the verb to the past participle form to properly describe the noun.

× For example my laptop, my handphone and my wallets because it's a essential thing for my work.

✓ For example, my laptop, my handphone, and my wallet because they're essential things for my work.

The word 'wallets' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they're' instead of 'it's'. Also, 'a essential thing' is incorrect because 'essential' starts with a vowel sound, so it should be 'an essential thing'. However, since multiple items are mentioned, 'essential things' fits better. The correction aligns the number agreement and article usage.

× Umm, I think it's skill helps me to stay organized.

✓ Umm, I think this skill helps me to stay organized.

The pronoun 'it's' (it is) is incorrectly used here. The correct demonstrative pronoun 'this' should be used to refer to the skill mentioned. This clarifies the subject and improves sentence clarity.

× Well, yes, I I was, I remember when it's me last week when I go to the stores and I forgot my wallets.

✓ Well, yes, I remember last week when I went to the stores and forgot my wallet.

The sentence has multiple tense and structure errors. 'I was' is unnecessary and confusing. 'It's me' is incorrect; it should be omitted. 'Go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past event. 'Wallets' should be singular 'wallet' for consistency. The correction simplifies and corrects tense and number.

× Yeah, I feel so stressed because I can paint my belongings, so I, I try to.

✓ Yeah, I felt so stressed because I could lose my belongings, so I tried to be careful.

The phrase 'I can paint my belongings' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. It should be 'I could lose my belongings' to express the concern. Also, tense consistency requires past tense 'felt' and 'tried' to match the past event. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects tense.

× Well, I think it's important to prepare my schedule before starting my day because it helped me to stay organized and manage my time effectively.

✓ Well, I think it's important to prepare my schedule before starting my day because it helps me to stay organized and manage my time effectively.

The verb 'helped' is in past tense, but the sentence refers to a general truth or habit, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate. This ensures tense consistency and correct meaning.

× By planning my activity in advance, I can stay organized and avoid feeling stress all overwhelmed.

✓ By planning my activities in advance, I can stay organized and avoid feeling stressed and overwhelmed.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match the general statement. 'Feeling stress all overwhelmed' is incorrect; it should be 'feeling stressed and overwhelmed' to use correct adjectives and conjunction. The correction improves quantifier use and adjective form.

× For example, when I have acquittal plan, I'm less likely to forget.

✓ For example, when I have an actual plan, I'm less likely to forget.

The word 'acquittal' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'actual'. Also, the article 'an' is needed before 'actual' because it starts with a vowel sound. The correction fixes vocabulary and article usage.

× Well, I usually write down essential text that I need to complete each day, either on my phone or my sticky notes that I place beside me.

✓ Well, I usually write down essential texts that I need to complete each day, either on my phone or on sticky notes that I place beside me.

'Text' should be plural 'texts' to indicate multiple items. Also, 'on' should be added before 'sticky notes' for parallel structure. The correction improves number agreement and preposition use.

× This help me stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important, for instance, having remain reminders.

✓ This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important, for instance, having reminder notes.

'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'This'. 'Ensure' should be 'ensures' for subject-verb agreement. 'Remain reminders' is incorrect; 'reminder notes' is the correct phrase. The correction fixes subject-verb agreement and vocabulary.