Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以简洁直接表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember important dates and facts even after a long time.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地说明忘记的事情，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Although I have good memory skills, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I sometimes forgot to bring my pencils to exams at school.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，句子较长且不够简洁。建议分句表达，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: In my daily life, I mainly need to remember exam content and homework assignments. These tasks are important both at school and at home.

제안: 回答较自然，但可以更具体说明方法，并使用连接词增强逻辑性。避免口头语如“Umm”。

예시: I use a special technique to remember important things. For example, I often visualize them as familiar images or graphics, which helps my brain recall them more easily.

× I think I'm talented at memorizing things, so whether The thing is important or not, I can always remember it's even after a very long time.

✓ I think I'm talented at memorizing things, so whether the thing is important or not, I can always remember it even after a very long time.

句中“it's”应为宾格“it”，因为这里是宾语，不能用主格缩写形式。

× Although I have a very good memorising skill, I did forget something in the past for for example I sometimes forgot to bring my my pencils when I'm going to exam to in school.

✓ Although I have a very good memorising skill, I did forget something in the past; for example, I sometimes forgot to bring my pencils when I was going to an exam at school.

“I'm going to exam to in school”时态和介词使用错误，应改为过去时“was going”并使用正确介词“at”，且“exam”前需加冠词“an”。

× I sometimes forgot to bring my my pencils when I'm going to exam to in school.

✓ I sometimes forgot to bring my pencils when I was going to an exam at school.

“going to exam to in school”中介词使用错误，应使用“going to an exam at school”。

× My daily life is mainly covered by going to school, so the majority of the things I need to remember is the the exam contents or something about the homework and assignments I need to do either in the school or at home every day.

✓ My daily life is mainly covered by going to school, so the majority of the things I need to remember are the exam contents or something about the homework and assignments I need to do either at school or at home every day.

主语“the majority of the things”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× the homework and assignments I need to do either in the school or at home every day.

✓ the homework and assignments I need to do either at school or at home every day.

“in the school”通常不用于表示上学，应使用“at school”。

× I often imagine the things into some graphics or pictures that I'm familiar with so my brain can easily remember them.

✓ I often imagine the things as some graphics or pictures that I'm familiar with so my brain can easily remember them.

动词“imagine”后应接介词“as”表示把事物想象成某物，而不是“into”。