Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、结构更清晰，并修正语法和用词错误。开头可直接回答问题（肯定或否定），接着用1–2个具体例子支持观点，使用连接词保持连贯。注意代词与介词搭配（例如 “where I put my things” 或 “where I leave my things”），避免重复词汇。控制在不超过5句。

예시: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I leave my bags or my rings, so I end up finding them in random places. Because of this, I try to slow down and put things in the same spot to avoid losing them.

제안: 回答应更流畅并完整描述事件，使用过去时一致且加入连接词说明结果。避免不完整句子，提供具体细节（什么时候、发生了什么、结果如何）。控制句子数量并注意时态和动词形式。

예시: Yes, once before an important exam I forgot my ID card at home. I realised it just before entering the exam room, so I called my mother and she brought it to me, but I arrived late and felt very stressed.

제안: 回答要更简洁有序，先用主题句直接回答，再用连接词列举要点，并用更准确的词汇（例如 “my phone” 和 “my bike key”）。避免重复词（如 “which which”）并将句子控制在2–3句内。可补充简短原因说明。

예시: In daily life I need to remember two main things: my phone and my bike key. My phone is essential for communication and work, and without my bike key I can't go to university, so I always keep them in the same place.

제안: 回答要清晰并使用恰当词汇，去掉填充词（umm, uh）和错误单词（如“donkey”应为某物或误说）。说明具体方法（如提醒、日历、固定地点）并举一两个具体例子，逻辑连贯并使用连接词。

예시: I usually create reminders on my phone and use the calendar app for important dates. For example, I set an alarm to remind me to bring my ID card before exams and mark important appointments in the calendar so I don't forget them.

× To be honest, I'm not good at memorizing things. I always forget. Where I put my things on, for instance, I always find my bags and my rings everywhere at my.

✓ To be honest, I'm not good at memorizing things. I always forget where I put my things; for instance, I find my bags and rings everywhere.

原句存在句子结构混乱和多余介词（如 "Where I put my things on" 和句尾的 "at my"），导致意思不清。英语中表示“我常常忘记我把东西放在哪里”应直接用宾语从句："I forget where I put my things." 此外，举例时用分号或连词连接更自然，去掉多余的冠词和代词（如 "my rings" 保留即可）。建议练习使用宾语从句和避免多余的介词。

× Yes, last weekend before I went to a crucial examination, I forgot my ID card. I forgot to take up my ID card and then I call my mom to.

✓ Yes, last weekend before I went to a crucial examination, I forgot my ID card. I forgot to take my ID card and then I called my mom.

原句在叙述过去发生的事情时，动词时态不一致：先用过去时“forgot”，之后却用现在时“call”。应全部用过去时："called"。另外短语 "take up my ID card" 不自然，改为 "take my ID card"。建议注意叙述过去事件时统一使用过去时。

× Where in my daily life I always need to remember two things, one is my mobile which which is essential for me to do everything and the other is the key of my bike.

✓ In my daily life I always need to remember two things: one is my mobile, which is essential for me to do everything, and the other is the key to my bike.

原句中介词和句序不当："Where in my daily life" 不需要 Where，应改为 "In my daily life"。此外“key of my bike” 更常用 "key to my bike"，定语从句前后需逗号隔开。重复单词 "which which" 也要去掉。建议练习常见介词搭配（如 key to）和从句标点用法。

× I made a list on my mobile phone to, umm, do reminders for me to remember important things like my uh, donkey, my ID card, and some other things.

✓ I made a list on my mobile phone to set reminders for me to remember important things like my ID card and some other things.

原句中 "do reminders" 用法不正确，英语中应说 "set reminders" 或 "make reminders"。此外出现了不合适的词 "donkey"（可能是口误），应去掉。建议记住常用动词搭配（例如 set reminders）并在正式表达中避免口语填充词。