Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Correct verb forms (e.g. 'I am good at memorising') and possessive/tense errors.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, a close friend of mine who has known me for ten years often says I remember lessons well, which shows I retain information consistently.

제안: Respond directly, use correct tense and remove fillers. Use linking words (however, because, but) properly and give a specific brief example of something forgotten and how you recovered it.

예시: Yes, I have sometimes forgotten important things when I don't focus or write them down. For instance, I once missed a meeting because I didn't note it, but a colleague reminded me and I quickly made up for it by rescheduling.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and use precise vocabulary. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'therefore' and give a specific routine or tool you use to remember tasks.

예시: I need to remember my upcoming tasks and plans for each day. For example, I make a daily to-do list and review it every evening, so I stay organised and complete tasks on time.

제안: Give a direct answer naming specific methods, use correct grammar and limit fillers. Explain briefly how each method helps you, using linking words like 'so' or 'for example'.

예시: I usually write important things in a diary or on my phone notes. For example, I set reminders and review my diary every morning, so I rarely forget important appointments.

× I would say that I really good at memorize things because the reason why I can, I say like that because it's one of my friends who staying with me about like 10 years.

✓ I would say that I am really good at memorizing things because one of my friends who has been staying with me for about ten years said so.

Error: missing verb 'am' and incorrect adjective/adverb usage ('really good' needs a linking verb). 'Memorize' should be the gerund 'memorizing' after a preposition or adjective. Tense and aspect for the friend should be present perfect progressive ('has been staying') to indicate an action continuing up to now. Suggestion: include the appropriate linking verb for adjectives, use gerund after expressions like 'good at', and use present perfect progressive for actions that started in the past and continue to the present.

× He said that, umm, I really good at memorize all the lessons that we learn.

✓ He said that I am really good at memorizing all the lessons that we learn.

Error: missing linking verb 'am' before 'really good' and wrong verb form 'memorize' instead of gerund 'memorizing'. Also unnecessary filler 'umm' removed for clarity. Suggestion: ensure sentences include required auxiliary verbs and use gerunds after 'good at'.

× So I would say that because of my friend, uh, told me.

✓ So I would say that because my friend told me.

Error: misplaced phrase 'because of' followed by a clause and an extra comma; pronoun/reference issue makes the sentence awkward. Suggestion: use 'because my friend told me' or 'because of my friend' followed by a noun; avoid redundant fillers.

× I would say that sometime, uh, when I didn't like focus on it too much, even though that is important, but I didn't like, umm, plan it or write it on my paper, so I tends to forgot it and but I can, uh, I can see that I easily restore it back when people just remind me of it.

✓ I would say that sometimes, when I did not focus on something enough, even if it was important, and I did not plan it or write it down, I tended to forget it, but I can usually recall it when people remind me.

Errors: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'didn't like focus' is incorrect collocation; use 'did not focus' or 'didn't focus'. 'Write it on my paper' should be 'write it down'. 'I tends to forgot' has subject-verb agreement and past-tense form errors; 'tends' conflicts with 'did' time frame and 'forgot' should be 'forget' or match tense. 'Restore it back' is awkward; use 'recall it' or 'remember it'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense, use correct adverb forms, correct collocations, and proper subject-verb agreement.

× So the thing that I need to remember for my daily life is about the task that I need to do the coming up days.

✓ The things I need to remember in my daily life are the tasks I need to do in the coming days.

Errors: 'remember for my daily life' should be 'remember in my daily life'. 'the task that I need to do the coming up days' has incorrect word order and preposition; use 'the tasks I need to do in the coming days'. Suggestion: use 'in' for contexts like 'in my daily life' and 'in the coming days' for time expressions; make subject and verb number agree.

× So when, uh, because I always plan myself, what should, uh, what do I need to do for the next days and what are the tasks that I need to complete because I'm a meticulous person, so I want everything organized and detailed.

✓ I always plan what I need to do for the next few days and the tasks I need to complete because I am a meticulous person and want everything organized and detailed.

Errors: tangled structure with unnecessary fillers and mixed question word order inside a statement ('what should, what do I need to do'). 'Plan myself' is incorrect collocation; use 'plan' or 'plan for myself'. Suggestion: remove fillers, use statement word order, and keep clauses concise.

× So I don't actually know about that, but the important thing is always keep in my mind, it's also, it always pop up and remind me and Alert me all the time.

✓ So I don't actually know how that works, but the important things always stay in my mind; they often pop up and remind me.

Errors: 'is always keep in my mind' mixes present simple with an infinitive; correct form is 'always stay in my mind' or 'is always kept in my mind' (passive). 'It always pop up' has subject-verb agreement error; 'pop up' should be 'pops up' if singular or 'they pop up' for plural. 'Alert me' capitalized incorrectly and awkward. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct verbs ('stay', 'pop up', 'remind').

× It's like the, uh, alert, uh, that remind me also what I use the, uh, the technique that I used to remember the important is I wrote it on my diary or my note.

✓ It's like an alert that reminds me. The technique I use to remember important things is writing them in my diary or notes.

Errors: sentence is run-on and ungrammatical. 'That remind me' should be 'that reminds me' (subject-verb agreement). 'What I use the... the technique that I used to remember the important is I wrote it' mixes tenses and incorrect word forms. Use gerund 'writing' after 'is' to describe the technique: 'the technique is writing them in my diary' or better 'I write them in my diary'. Suggestion: split into two sentences, maintain consistent tense, use gerund when defining a method, and ensure subject-verb agreement.