Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct noun/verb forms and articles, and limit to 2–4 sentences. Add a brief, specific example to support the claim and use linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things. I often remember small details in stories and visual scenes, such as colours or locations, which helps me retell them accurately. For example, when I read a short story last week, I could recall the character’s exact dialogue and setting.

제안: Give a direct answer with one clear example and correct tense usage. Use linking words to explain frequency and a brief reason if possible. Keep it within three sentences.

예시: It is very rare for me to forget something important. However, I once missed a dentist appointment because I forgot to sync it to my calendar. Since then, I always set reminders to avoid that happening again.

제안: Answer the question directly by naming typical daily items to remember, then describe your method succinctly. Remove hesitations and duplicate words, use correct prepositions and articles, and include one linking word for clarity.

예시: In daily life I need to remember appointments, assignments and shopping items. Therefore, I usually put important tasks in my phone’s reminder app and set alarms so I do not forget them.

제안: This answer is clear and relevant. To improve further, add one more specific detail or a short result to show effectiveness, and use a linking phrase to connect sentences for smoother flow.

예시: I usually set a reminder or alarm on my phone for important tasks. For example, I add appointments and bill payments to my calendar, so I rarely miss them and can plan my day more effectively.

× Yes, I am very good at that memorizing.

✓ Yes, I am very good at memorising that.

Use of 'that memorizing' is awkward; 'memorising' is the gerund form and should follow 'good at'. Also use British spelling 'memorising'.

× I can remember every specific details in the stories or it can be visual things and uh I can realizing where were small details.

✓ I can remember every specific detail in stories, or visual things, and I can notice where the small details are.

'Every' requires a singular noun: use 'detail' not 'details'. 'In the stories' can be simplified to 'in stories'. 'It can be visual things' is unclear and ungrammatical; 'visual things' is acceptable without 'it can be'. 'I can realizing' mixes forms; use 'I can notice' (base verb after 'can'). Word order for 'where the small details are' should place the verb at the end of the clause.

× It's very rare. I don't remember specifically what I forgot, but I'm pretty sure something I have forgot in the past.

✓ It's very rare. I don't remember specifically what I forgot, but I'm pretty sure I have forgotten something in the past.

The present perfect requires the past participle 'forgotten', not 'forgot'. Also word order: 'I'm pretty sure I have forgotten something' is natural. Keep tense consistent when referring to past experiences.

× What do you need to remember in your daily life?

✓ What do you need to remember in your daily life?

This sentence is already correct; 'in your daily life' is an acceptable prepositional phrase. No change needed.

× I cannot say something specific right now, but if I have something very important in daily, probably, uh, I write in my reminder and make alarm for that to remind me.

✓ I cannot say anything specific right now, but if I have something very important in daily life, I probably write it in my reminders and set an alarm to remind me.

Use 'anything' not 'something' after 'cannot'. 'In daily' is incomplete; use 'in daily life'. 'I write in my reminder' should be 'write it in my reminders' (plural or 'my reminder app') and 'make alarm' should be 'set an alarm'. Use 'to remind me' for purpose. Also move 'probably' to a natural position.

× And that's how I handle handle with things.

✓ And that's how I handle things.

Do not use 'handle with'—'handle' is transitive and takes a direct object: 'handle things'. Also remove the duplicated 'handle'. If using a reflexive sense you could say 'I handle things myself' but here simple 'handle things' is correct.

× I usually set a reminder or an alarm on my phone for anything important.

✓ I usually set a reminder or an alarm on my phone for anything important.

This sentence is correct; 'set' is appropriate. No change needed.

× For example, I put appointments and bill payments in my calendar so I don't forget them.

✓ For example, I put appointments and bill payments in my calendar so I do not forget them.

Sentence is grammatically correct; only minor style change to expand 'don't' to 'do not' for formality. No structural error present.