Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は正直で直接的ですが、文法ミスや冗長な表現があり、論理のつながりが弱いです。語順や動詞形（forget → forget/forgetting）、冠詞や単語の重複を直し、簡潔なトピック文＋補足（理由と例）でまとめるとより自然になります。また、接続詞（because、so）を使い論理を明確にしてください。

예시: Not really. I have never been good at memorising things because I need to repeat information several times. For example, I often forget details unless I make notes or actively try to remember them.

제안: 答えは出来事を述べていますが、文法ミス（時制、語順）、不完全な文や重複（academic online academic）があります。具体的な一例を簡潔に説明し、原因とその後の対策を接続詞でつなげてください。完全な文で理由と結果を付け加えると良いです。

예시: Yes, a few times. For example, I once missed an online academic conference because I accepted the wrong date and didn't write it down. Since then, I always record important appointments in my calendar.

제안: 内容は伝わりますが、語句の欠落（“meeting with veterans and.” の不完全な列挙）や文のつながりが曖昧です。具体的な項目（meetings, deadlines, errands）を列挙し、接続詞（for example, such as, and）で整理し、最大5文以内で簡潔に述べてください。

예시: I usually need to remember my schedule, such as meetings, study-related tasks and deadlines. Keeping track of these things helps my day run more smoothly and prevents last-minute stress.

제안: 良い道具（To Doリスト、カレンダー）を挙げていますが、説明が途中で切れており不明瞭です。現在の方法と過去の方法を対比して説明し、具体的な使い方（リマインダー設定、色分けなど）を付け加えると説得力が増します。文は完全な文にして、接続詞でつなげてください。

예시: I mostly use to-do list and calendar apps, setting reminders and colour-coding events. I used to rely on paper schedules, but now digital reminders ensure I don't forget important tasks.

× Not really. I've never been very good at memorizing things ever since I was young.

✓ Not really. I've never been very good at memorizing things since I was young.

The phrase 'ever since' with present perfect is redundant here; use 'since' to indicate a starting point. Also remove 'ever' which is unnecessary. Use present perfect 'I've never been' to show a state from the past to now.

× I need to repeat information several times and I still find forget easily until I make notes or put effort into remembering it.

✓ I need to repeat information several times and I still find myself forgetting easily until I make notes or put effort into remembering it.

The verb phrase 'find forget' is ungrammatical. Use 'find myself' + present participle 'forgetting' to express that the speaker experiences the action. Also 'forget easily' should be 'forgetting easily' to match 'find myself' structure.

× I have a few times I've forgotten important appointments before because I didn't write them down.

✓ I've forgotten important appointments a few times before because I didn't write them down.

The original sentence has redundant and awkward word order ('I have a few times I've...'). Combine into a single present perfect clause 'I've forgotten... a few times' to express repeated past experiences continuing to present.

× For example, I once missed an academic online academic conference because I accept the date.

✓ For example, I once missed an online academic conference because I accepted the wrong date.

The verb 'accept' should be in the past tense 'accepted' to match the past event. Also clarify 'the date' by specifying 'the wrong date' for meaning. Use past simple 'missed' with past reason 'accepted'.

× So since then I made it a.

✓ So since then I've made it a point to write things down.

The fragment 'I made it a.' is incomplete. Use the full idiom 'make it a point to' with present perfect 'I've made' to show a habit established in the past and continuing to now.

× I usually remember my schedule, such as meeting with veterans and. Study related tasks, keeping track of them really helps my day run more smoothly.

✓ I usually remember my schedule, such as meetings with veterans and study-related tasks; keeping track of them really helps my day run more smoothly.

The original has fragments and punctuation errors. Use plural 'meetings' and hyphenate 'study-related'. Combine into one coherent sentence with a semicolon or conjunction to connect the clauses.

× I mostly use my To Do List and calendar apps.

✓ I mostly use my to-do list and calendar apps.

Capitalization and formatting: 'To Do List' should be 'to-do list'. This is not a major grammar error but standardizes form. Verb tense 'use' is correct for habitual action.

× I used to use Schedule paper Schedule what I. Forgot something?

✓ I used to use a paper schedule, but I often forgot something.

The original is fragmented and unclear. 'Used to use' is acceptable for past habit; add 'a paper schedule' and complete the clause 'but I often forgot something' to indicate past problems. Maintain past tense for past habit.