Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接且自然，但存在语法错误、表达重复和连贯性问题。建议：1) 用一句主题句直接回答（例如：I’m not very good at memorising things），2) 用1–2个清晰的支持句说明你如何应对（如用手机提醒和待办事项应用），3) 注意语法（过去/现在时一致）、去掉重复并使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”使句子更流畅。

예시: I’m not very good at memorising things. So I usually set reminders on my phone and use a to‑do list app to record tasks. If I don’t note them down, I tend to forget.

제안: 内容具体且有细节，结构良好，但可改进语法和连词使用以更自然：将时间状语放在句首或用从句连接，避免冗余，并可加一两句反思（如学到的经验）。

예시: Yes. Last year I forgot my student ID on the day of a final exam, so I had to rush home to get it. It was very stressful and I nearly missed the exam, so now I always check my bag the night before.

제안: 回答内容相关且具体，但开头重复且可以更简洁。建议：1) 用一句主题句概括要记住的主要事项，2) 用连接词列举具体例子，3) 可补充一条不同的记忆方法或优先级说明，使内容更丰富。

예시: As a student, I mainly need to remember my class schedule, start times and homework deadlines. For example, I set phone reminders for classes and use a calendar to prioritise urgent assignments.

제안: 回答表达清楚但有语法和句子断裂问题。建议：1) 先给出总的策略（e.g. I use digital tools and habits），2) 用连接词列举具体工具和场景，3) 修正语法（不要省略主语/介词），并可举一例说明效果。

예시: I mainly rely on digital tools and daily habits. For very important events like meetings or birthdays, I put them in my calendar with notifications, and I also use to‑do list apps for tasks so I don’t forget them.

× I usually set reminders on my phone and also use them To Do List apps to record everything what I want to do if I did, If I don't take them down, I will forget them.

✓ I usually set reminders on my phone and also use To-Do List apps to record everything I want to do. If I don't write them down, I will forget them.

句子有多处问题：1) “use them To Do List apps” 词序错误且多余的代词“them”应去掉；2) “To Do List” 应改为常见写法“To-Do List”；3) “everything what I want to do” 中多余的关系词“what”应省略；4) “if I did” 时态和语义错误，应为现在时的条件从句“if I don't write them down”。总体需把句子拆成两句以保证清晰流畅。建议多注意非限定性描述中不使用“what”，以及条件句时态一致。

× Yes, I still remember last year I forgot my student ID card when I was going to take a final exam.

✓ Yes, I still remember that last year I forgot my student ID card when I was going to take a final exam.

句子中缺少连接词“that”会使时间状语和宾语从句衔接不顺。主要问题是省略连接词导致表达不清。建议在类似“我记得（that）……”结构中加上“that”以使句子更自然。

× Well, I think there are quite a lot of different things I need to remember.

✓ Well, I think there are quite a lot of different things that I need to remember.

句子在口语中可通，但书面或正式表达中在“things”和从句之间应加连接词“that”以完整引导定语从句。建议学习并使用关系代词“that”来连接先行词与从句，使句子结构更完整。

× While I usually set the reminders on my, if there are something very important like a meeting or someone's birthday, I will put it in my calendar with notifications and sometimes I also use some To Do List apps.

✓ I usually set reminders on my phone. If there is something very important, like a meeting or someone's birthday, I will put it in my calendar with notifications, and sometimes I also use To-Do List apps.

原句问题：1) “While I usually set the reminders on my,” 不完整，缺少宾语“phone”；2) “if there are something” 主谓不一致且“something”为单数，应为“if there is something”；3) “I will put it in my calendar” 中代词“it”指代模糊但可保留，句子更自然拆为两句并加入逗号连接。建议注意代词和名词数的一致性，确保句子完整并指明宾语。