Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够清晰连贯，句子结构混乱，词汇使用错误（如 remind me, better sleep），且信息重复。建议先用一句主题句直接回答（I’m not very good at memorising things），然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持，用连接词使逻辑清楚。注意语法：使用动名词或动词不带多余词，避免重复停顿，多练习简短完整句子。

예시: I’m not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys because I don’t pay attention when I put them down. As a result, I try to double-check my actions to avoid losing things.

제안: 回答含混且语法错误多，信息不明确（case 指什么不清楚），有大量停顿和重复。建议先直接回答并给出具体例子（I once/many times forgot my...），说明后果并用连接词（for example, because, so）整理叙述。练习用具体名词（wallet, bag）替代模糊词“case”。

예시: Yes, I have. For example, last month I forgot my wallet at a neighbour’s house and couldn’t pay for groceries. Because I didn’t check my bag before leaving, I had to go back and collect it.

제안: 回答表达模糊且句子不完整，缺乏清晰结构。建议先用一句话概括要记住的主要事项（appointments, deadlines, meetings），然后列举具体事项并说明为什么重要，使用连接词如 for example 或 such as 来组织细节。注意时态和名词形式（research, presentations）。

예시: I need to remember my daily tasks and appointments. For example, I often have research deadlines and online meetings, so I write down important dates and set reminders to make sure I’m prepared.

제안: 回答较为清楚但句子不够自然，有重复（remind me twice）和词序问题（on my phones）。建议使用更自然表达（I always make a to-do list on my phone and set reminders），并补充具体细节说明效果或举例（how reminders help, which app you use）。保持一句主题句加一两句支持即可。

예시: I always make a to-do list on my phone and set reminders for important tasks. For instance, I use calendar alerts to notify me 30 minutes before meetings, which helps reduce stress and keeps me on schedule.

× No, I'm not good at remind me remember some things umm because I I have a but I have a better sleep.

✓ No, I'm not good at remembering things because I don't sleep well.

原句中應用固定搭配“be good at + 動名詞”，因此“remind me remember”不正確。應使用動名詞remembering作為介詞“at”的賓語。另外原句中主語與睡眠狀況表述混亂，推測想表達“我睡得不好”，用“I don't sleep well.” 更自然。建議記住固定搭配並用簡潔句子表達原因。

× So I think the best sleep is very not good for remember.

✓ So I think sleeping well is very important for memory.

原句語序和詞類使用混亂。“the best sleep is very not good for remember”中“best sleep”“very not good”與“for remember”都不合語法。應使用動名詞短語“sleeping well”作主語，並用“important for memory”或“good for remembering”。建議使用正確的形容詞搭配和動詞形式：'important for memory' 或 'good for remembering'。

× Yes, I often forgot my case, uh everywhere, So sometimes I, uh, keep the keep the kids to my neighbors homes where I cannot find my case. I will have have I have.

✓ Yes, I often forget my suitcase everywhere. Sometimes I leave my kids at my neighbors' homes and cannot find my suitcase.

原句時態混用與單複數、詞語搭配錯誤。用於習慣性動作應使用一般現在時“often forget”而不是過去式“forgot”。“case”應改為更常用的“suitcase”或“bag”。“keep the kids to my neighbors homes”不地道，應用“leave my kids at my neighbors' homes”。此外刪去重複片段“I will have have I have”。建議檢查時態與慣用搭配，保持句子簡潔。

× Uh, I have meaning to do things in a day, so just like some research or, uh, some presentations, I think it is very important.

✓ I have many things to do in a day, such as research or presentations, which I think are very important.

原句“have meaning to do things”結構不正確，應為“have many things to do”。列舉時用“such as”更自然。關係代詞引導的從句應與先行詞一致，並使用複數動詞“are”對應“research or presentations”。建議學會用固定表達“have things to do”和使用“such as”引出例子。

× And sometimes I have the online meeting. Umm, so I, so I.

✓ And sometimes I have online meetings.

原句中“the online meeting”使用了定冠詞且單數，但說的是經常性的活動，應用複數“一些線上會議”即“online meetings”。刪除口頭語“Umm, so I, so I”。建議注意可數名詞單複數和省略多餘的填充詞。

× I will always write A to do list on my phones and the phones can remind me, remind me that everything's on the time I think it is go for more my work and reduce the worrying.

✓ I always write a to-do list on my phone and the phone can remind me that everything is on time. I think it helps my work and reduces my worries.

原句中多處語法錯誤：'write A to do list' 應為 'write a to-do list'；'phones' 應為單數 'phone'（指個人手機）；'everything's on the time' 應為 'everything is on time'；最後部分需改為完整句子 'It helps my work and reduces my worries.' 注意動詞形式和主謂一致。建議使用常見短語 'to-do list', 'on time', 並保持主語一致和簡潔表達。