Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with grammar and word choice, and make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and use specific examples. Use linking words if adding details.

예시: Yes, I have a good memory, especially for personal events. For example, I clearly remember visiting the park with my mother when I was a child, including the games we played and the smell of the flowers. This helps show what I remember and why those memories are vivid.

제안: Fix grammar errors and use consistent tense. Give a concise topic sentence, then briefly explain a specific incident and the consequence, using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

예시: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, I once missed a weekly work meeting because I didn't set a reminder, which affected my team. Because of that, I now always add meetings to my calendar and set an alarm.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about routines or times. Correct word order and tense for natural speech.

예시: In daily life I need to remember my weekly work meetings and to feed my cat. For instance, my meetings are usually on Mondays at 9 a.m., and because my mother comes home late, I feed the cat every evening at 7 p.m.

제안: Use correct grammar (verb forms and articles) and more natural phrasing. Start with a topic sentence, then add brief specific steps and link them logically. Avoid unnatural phrases like 'Avoid to unforgotten'.

예시: I usually use my phone and a calendar to remember important things. For example, I add meetings to a digital calendar and set two reminders—one a day before and another 15 minutes before—so I don't forget them.

× 'For example, I usually memory that I worked at park with my mom when I was a child.'

✓ 'For example, I usually remember that I worked at the park with my mom when I was a child.'

'memory' is a noun; the verb 'remember' should be used here. Also include the definite article before 'park'. Use present simple 'remember' for habitual recollection. Suggestion: replace "memory" with "remember" and add "the" before "park".'

× 'Yes, I forgotten something important very frequently.'

✓ 'Yes, I forget important things very frequently.'

'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary (have) for present perfect. The speaker describes a habitual present situation, so present simple 'forget' is appropriate. Suggestion: use "I forget" for regular occurrences or "I have forgotten" with context for past experiences.'

× 'For example, I usually forgot my weekly meeting in my workplace, so I will use calendar.'

✓ 'For example, I usually forget my weekly meeting at work, so I use a calendar.'

'forgot' is past tense but the adverb "usually" indicates a habitual action, so present simple 'forget' is correct. "in my workplace" is unnatural; use "at work". "will use" implies future; since this is a habitual solution, use present simple 'use' and add the article 'a' before 'calendar'. Suggestion: say "I usually forget my weekly meeting at work, so I use a calendar."'

× 'At this point in my life I need to remember my time of weekly work meeting and I need to remember to feed my cat because my mom will return home very late usually.'

✓ 'At this point in my life, I need to remember the time of my weekly work meeting and I need to remember to feed my cat because my mom usually returns home very late.'

'time of weekly work meeting' needs articles and possessive order: 'the time of my weekly work meeting' or better 'the time of my weekly meeting at work'. Adverb 'usually' should be placed before the verb 'returns'. Use present simple 'returns' for habitual action. Add comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: reorder and add articles for clarity.'

× 'I think set a reminder on my phone or make a calendar is very important to remember things.'

✓ 'I think setting a reminder on my phone or making a calendar is very important for remembering things.'

After verbs like 'think' when expressing an opinion about actions in general, use the -ing form (gerund): 'setting' and 'making'. Also use 'for remembering things' or 'to remember things' with adjusted structure. Suggestion: use gerunds and correct preposition.'

× 'For me, I usually set a time of my meeting in my calendar.'

✓ 'For me, I usually put the time of my meeting in my calendar.'

'set a time of my meeting' is understandable but 'put the time of my meeting in my calendar' or 'set the time of my meeting in my calendar' is more natural. Present simple 'usually put' is correct for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'put' or 'set' with 'the' and natural phrasing.'

× 'Avoid to unforgotten.'

✓ 'I do this to avoid forgetting.'

'Avoid' should be followed by a gerund ('avoiding' or 'avoid' + gerund): 'avoid forgetting'. 'Unforgotten' is not used this way. The intended meaning is 'to avoid forgetting', so restructure: 'I do this to avoid forgetting.' Suggestion: use 'avoid' + -ing or 'so I don't forget.'