Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然并注意句子完整性与细节。避免重复（e.g. "write them down" 与 "write on my notebook"）并修正语法错误。应先给出直接的主题句，然后用1–2个具体细节支持，比如说明用哪类应用、如何分类或何时查看。保持不超过5句。

예시: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things because I always record important items on my phone. For example, I use a notes app to list tasks and shopping items, and I check the list before I leave the house. This helps me avoid forgetting anything important.

제안: 回答需更流畅、减少犹豫词并改进时态与连贯性。先给出简短主题句说明曾经忘记，然后用具体情境（时间、物品、后果）作支撑，并用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I once forgot something important. Last weekend I left home without my ID card before a major exam, so I couldn't register at first. Fortunately, a friend brought it to me, and I was able to sit the exam on time.

제안: 回答应更具体并使用连接词来组织信息。例如先概述需要记住的主要类别，然后分别给出具体例子或理由。避免笼统列举，说明如何安排或为何重要会更有说服力。

예시: I need to remember both my study and family responsibilities. For instance, I keep a checklist for homework and work tasks, and before going out I always make sure I have my phone and my children's essentials like snacks and jackets.

제안: 回答要去掉填充词並提高语法准确性。先给出主题句说明主要方法，然后用连接词（e.g. 'Also', 'For example'）补充具体做法（使用哪款应用、如何设置提醒、是否有备份）。保持简短且有条理。

예시: I usually write important items on my phone and set alarms as reminders. For example, I use a reminders app to list tasks and schedule an alarm 30 minutes before each appointment so I have time to prepare.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing things because I always write them down my on my phone.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things because I always write them down on my phone.

原句中“down my on my phone”存在词序和多余词汇错误。正确表达为“write them down on my phone”。建议记住固定搭配“write something down”后面常接介词“on”来说明存放位置，例如“write it down on my phone/ in my notebook”。

× For example, when I go out, I write these things on my notebook and.

✓ For example, when I go out, I write these things in my notebook.

原句末尾有残缺的连词“and”且介词使用不当。英语中应使用“write ... in my notebook”表示写在笔记本内，句子不能以“and”结尾。建议写完整句子并使用正确介词“in”。

× I forgot an important thing, uh, last weekend I forgot to take my ID card before, uh, an important uh, exams.

✓ I forgot an important thing last weekend: I forgot to take my ID card before an important exam.

原句中时态为过去，需保持一致。另外“an important exams”中冠词与名词单复数不一致，应为“an important exam”。建议保持单数或复数一致并去掉多余停顿，清晰表达两个并列过去事件。

× Luckily uh, my friends send it to me so I didn't miss the exam.

✓ Luckily, my friends sent it to me so I didn't miss the exam.

这里不仅涉及时态（过去时应为“sent”），同时“send it to me”语法上可接受但时态错误归为过去时问题。已在更正中修正为过去时。建议注意过去发生的动作要用过去式。

× For example, when I go out, I must take my kids and phone.

✓ For example, when I go out, I must take my kids and my phone.

原句中并列名词“kids and phone”缺少第二个所有格限定“my”，会造成歧义。应在并列项中重复所有格或在前面使用复数所有格（例如“my kids and my phone”）。建议在并列名词前都加上适当的限定词以保持清晰。

× Uh, I always write them down on my phone, uh, before an important things, uh, I will set alarm clock, uh, to remind me.

✓ I always write them down on my phone. Before important things, I set an alarm clock to remind me.

原句有多个问题： 1) “an important things”中冠词与名词数不匹配，应为“important things”或“an important thing”。 2) 表习惯应使用一般现在时而不是将来时“will set”，因此改为“I set an alarm clock”。 3) “alarm clock”前需加不定冠词“an”。根据题意是说日常做法，应使用现在时并保持句子简洁。建议把长句拆成两句并使用一般现在时和正确冠词。