Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は内容が伝わるが、文法ミスや繰り返しが目立ちます。まずは文法（動詞のing形・不定詞の使い分け）を直し、冗長な繰り返しを避けて一文目で主張を示し、その後具体例を一つだけ加えると効果的です。また、話を自然に繋げるために接続詞（for example, so, because）を使ってください。発音や流暢さも練習して、5文以内で答えることを意識しましょう。

예시: Yes, I am. I'm good at memorizing difficult words, especially in English and Spanish. For example, I use flashcards and spaced repetition to remember vocabulary, which helps me learn new languages more quickly.

제안: 内容は伝わるが文法と語彙の選び方に多くの誤りがあります（'forgot'や'forgotten'の使い方、'flown'は不適切、'apologize him'は誤り）。まず正しい動詞を使い、出来事を時制に沿って簡潔に述べ、原因や結果を短く説明してください。加えて、代名詞や前置詞の使い方（apologize to someone）を確認しましょう。

예시: Yes, I have. Once I forgot a friend's name at university, which was embarrassing. My friend was upset, so I apologized to him and tried to remember names better by reviewing people's profiles before meeting them.

제안: 回答が意味不明になっており、文の構造や語順の改善が必要です。まず最初に直接的な主張（例：I need to remember recipes or tasks）を述べ、次に具体例や理由を一つ示してください。不要な語を省き、短く明確な文を連ね、接続詞（because, so, for example）でつなぎましょう。

예시: I need to remember recipes and daily tasks. For example, I remember the steps for cooking dinner because preparing meals is important for my health and saves time.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で論理的な構成が欠けています。まず方法を明確に述べ（例えば 'I use lists or visual cues'）、次に具体的な手法と理由を一つ加えてください。曖昧な表現や言い直しは控え、簡潔に話す練習をしてください。視覚的記憶やメモの使用など具体例を用いると説得力が増します。

예시: I usually make lists or use visual cues to remember important things. For instance, I put a sticky note on the door for my keys or set reminders on my phone so I don't forget appointments.

× I'm good at memorize memorizing difficult words such as English or Spanish.

✓ I'm good at memorizing difficult words, such as English or Spanish.

The phrase 'good at' requires the gerund form (-ing) after it. 'Memorize' should be 'memorizing'. Also add a comma before 'such as' for clarity.

× So I I'm happy to study foreign languages and I'm good at English.

✓ So I'm happy to study foreign languages, and I'm good at English.

There was an extra 'I' and missing punctuation. Remove the duplicate 'I' and connect two independent clauses with a comma and conjunction.

× I've flown and my friend's name in my university for example.

✓ I've forgotten my friend's name at university, for example.

'Flown' is incorrect contextually; the speaker meant 'forgotten' which is present perfect (I have forgotten). Use 'at university' rather than 'in my university' in natural English.

× It is very serious problem for us.

✓ It is a very serious problem for me/us.

The noun phrase needs an article 'a'. Also choose 'me' or 'us' to match meaning; original used 'us' later, but speaker may mean 'me', so both are possible.

× My friends are so angry and I apologize him.

✓ My friends were so angry and I apologized to him/them.

'Apologize' requires the preposition 'to' when specifying the person. Also tense consistency: if describing a past event, use past tense 'were' and 'apologized'. Decide 'him' or 'them' to match whether one friend or multiple were angry.

× I have to remember in my daily life.

✓ There are things I have to remember in my daily life.

Original is incomplete and lacks a clear object. Adding 'There are things' supplies a subject and makes the sentence grammatical.

× How to cook dishes it is essential for me to make a day, make my life and I want to cook myself from by cooking.

✓ Knowing how to cook dishes is essential for my daily life, and I want to cook for myself.

Rephrase to use a gerund 'Knowing how to cook' as subject. 'Make a day, make my life' is unclear; use 'essential for my daily life'. 'Cook myself' is incorrect; use 'cook for myself'. Remove extraneous words like 'from' and duplicate 'by cooking'.

× MMM, it is difficult question.

✓ Hmm, that's a difficult question.

Use 'that's' (that is) and the article 'a' before 'difficult question'. Also natural filler 'Hmm' or 'Well' is preferable.

× I remember important things.

✓ I use memory techniques to remember important things.

Original is grammatical but vague in context; improving for answer to question about how: specify method. If keeping original, it is acceptable but doesn't answer 'how'. Here provided clearer verb phrase.

× Uh, marching important scenery or an object? Is more convenient for me objects before we work memory.

✓ Remembering an important scene or an object is more convenient for me; I recall objects better when I need them for work.

Replace 'marching' with 'remembering' (wrong word form). Use 'scene' instead of 'scenery' in this context. Fix sentence order and structure: 'is more convenient for me' should follow the subject. Clarify 'objects before we work memory' to 'I recall objects better when I need them for work' for natural meaning.