Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and filler words like 'uh'. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly. For example, explain why chocolate makes you feel energetic in a clear way.

예시: Yes, I enjoy eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and gives me a quick energy boost when I need it.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details about your cravings to make it more engaging.

예시: I don't eat chocolate very often; however, I usually indulge in it whenever I have a sweet craving, especially after a long day.

제안: There seems to be a confusion or mistake in your answer. Clarify your meaning and avoid unclear phrases. Also, provide more details to support your answer.

예시: Yes, when I was scared as a child, I often ate chocolate to comfort myself because it made me feel better.

제안: Avoid incomplete sentences and vague phrases. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because of its rich taste and the fact that many people enjoy it as a sweet treat.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural by rephrasing and adding linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: My favourite flavour is nutty, so I usually enjoy Dairy Milk chocolates that contain nuts.

제안: Avoid filler words and unclear expressions. Use clear and natural language to explain your ideas, and provide specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I think giving chocolate as a gift is a great idea because it creates a sweet and thoughtful connection with the person you care about.

× Yes, I usually eat chocolates because they are very tasty and by eating eating chocolates, uh, make me feel more energetic.

✓ Yes, I usually eat chocolate because it is very tasty and eating chocolate makes me feel more energetic.

The word 'chocolates' is plural, but here it refers to chocolate in general, which is uncountable and should be singular. Also, 'by eating eating chocolates' is redundant and incorrect; 'eating chocolate' is the correct form. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'eating chocolate'.

× Not very often, but I usually eat chocolates when I have cravings.

✓ Not very often, but I usually eat chocolate when I have cravings.

'Chocolate' is an uncountable noun when referring to the substance in general, so 'chocolates' should be 'chocolate' here.

× Yes, when I was scared I usually eat chocolate chilli.

✓ Yes, when I was scared I usually ate chocolate chilli.

The sentence refers to a past habitual action, so the verb should be in the past tense 'ate' instead of the present tense 'eat'.

× According to me, the chocolates are famous for its taste and. Preference of other people.

✓ According to me, chocolate is famous for its taste and preference among other people.

'Chocolates' should be 'chocolate' as it refers to the substance in general. Also, 'its' correctly refers to 'chocolate' which is singular. The phrase 'Preference of other people' is incomplete and should be 'preference among other people'.

× I usually eat Dairy Milk chocolates in that my favorite flavor is nuts.

✓ I usually eat Dairy Milk chocolate, and my favorite flavor is nuts.

'Dairy Milk chocolates' should be 'Dairy Milk chocolate' as it refers to the product generally. The phrase 'in that' is incorrect here and should be replaced with 'and' to connect the two ideas properly.

× Yeah, of course it's a very good option to give a chocolate as a gift to others because uh, uh, it uh, makes a very sweetness, uh, bonding with the one that we loves.

✓ Yeah, of course it's a very good option to give chocolate as a gift to others because it creates a sweet bond with the ones we love.

'A chocolate' should be 'chocolate' as an uncountable noun here. 'Makes a very sweetness' is incorrect; it should be 'creates a sweet bond'. 'The one that we loves' is incorrect; it should be 'the ones we love' to match plural and correct verb agreement.