Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并直接表达喜欢巧克力的原因。

예시: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and gives me energy, especially when I travel.

제안: 时态使用错误，表达不准确，建议使用正确的时态并清晰说明频率。

예시: When I was a child, I ate chocolate two or three times a week, but now I only eat it two or three times a month.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清楚，建议简化句子并明确说明原因。

예시: Yes, I often ate chocolate with my friends when I was a child because it gave us energy and we enjoyed sharing different kinds.

제안: 词汇使用错误（snake应为snack），表达不自然，建议使用正确词汇并简洁说明原因。

예시: I think chocolate is a unique and delicious snack, so it is popular all over the world.

제안: 表达不清晰，词汇使用不当，建议直接说明喜欢的巧克力种类并解释原因。

예시: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate because it has a rich and slightly bitter taste.

제안: 表达不够自然，句子结构不完整，建议简洁表达巧克力作为礼物的意义。

예시: Yes, chocolate is a popular gift worldwide because it symbolizes good luck and brings happiness to people.

× Yes, I like eating chocolate because I think chocolate is very delicious for us send our children, we can eat them during our travel time or tourist.

✓ Yes, I like eating chocolate because I think chocolate is very delicious for us and our children; we can eat it during our travel time or when we are tourists.

句中“for us send our children”应为“for us and our children”，且“eat them”指代不明确，巧克力作为不可数名词应使用“eat it”。此外，“during our travel time or tourist”表达不清，应改为“during our travel time or when we are tourists”。

× During my childhood I eat chocolate two or three times a week, but now I'm an audience so I don't eat chocolate anymore. Maybe two or three time a month.

✓ During my childhood, I ate chocolate two or three times a week, but now I'm an adult so I don't eat chocolate anymore. Maybe two or three times a month.

描述过去的习惯动作应使用过去时“ate”，而非现在时“eat”。“audience”错误，应为“adult”。“two or three time”应为复数“times”。

× Yes, I did, because when I was child I often eat chocolate with each other and we can show different kinds of chocolate to other people, which can make us fall for energy.

✓ Yes, I did, because when I was a child I often ate chocolate together with others and we could show different kinds of chocolate to other people, which could give us energy.

“when I was child”缺少冠词，应为“a child”。描述过去习惯动作用过去时“ate”。“eat chocolate with each other”表达不自然，应为“ate chocolate together with others”。“can”应改为过去时“could”。“make us fall for energy”表达错误，应为“give us energy”。

× Because I think chocolate is a unique snake which is very delicious and tasty good. So it's very popular around the world.

✓ Because I think chocolate is a unique snack which is very delicious and tasty. So it's very popular around the world.

“snake”应为“snack”，意思为零食。形容词“tasty good”重复且错误，应只用“tasty”或“delicious”。

× For chocolate, I like black chocolate, which is the simplify of the chocolate variety of chocolate because it's taste.

✓ For chocolate, I like dark chocolate, which is the simplest variety of chocolate because of its taste.

“simplify”用错，应为“simplest”。“black chocolate”通常称为“dark chocolate”。“because it's taste”应为“because of its taste”。

× Yes, I think chocolate is very popular around the world, so we can exchange our gifts by chocolate. It's now a symbol of good luck and exchange happier.

✓ Yes, I think chocolate is very popular around the world, so we can exchange gifts with chocolate. It's now a symbol of good luck and happiness.

“exchange our gifts by chocolate”表达错误，应为“exchange gifts with chocolate”。“exchange happier”语法错误，应为“happiness”。