Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, but try to avoid starting with informal phrases like 'Guess'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and keep your sentences concise.

예시: I really like eating chocolate, especially varieties with nuts like almonds and raisins. Chocolate is my go-to comfort food because I eat it when I'm stressed. For instance, last night I was nervous about an exam, so I ate some chocolate which helped me feel better.

제안: Good answer with clear reasoning. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases like 'prefer'.

예시: Although chocolate is my comfort food, I eat it only once a month because I know it's unhealthy. Therefore, I maintain a balanced diet that includes chocolate but in moderation.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use past tense consistently and link your ideas clearly.

예시: Yes, I ate a lot of chocolate when I was a kid. In fact, offering me chocolate was the best way to get my attention. However, this caused problems because I developed many cavities and had to visit the dentist frequently.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make your points clearer and more connected.

예시: I believe chocolate is popular worldwide because most people enjoy its taste. Unlike other sweets, which vary according to personal preferences, chocolate is also convenient to carry and can be eaten anytime and anywhere.

제안: Excellent answer with good vocabulary and details. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and avoid phrases like 'I think everyone craves' which are less formal.

예시: My favourite flavour of chocolate is mild chocolate with nuts such as roasted almonds and hazelnuts. I enjoy this combination because it offers the creamy sweetness of chocolate along with the crunchy texture of the nuts, making it very satisfying.

제안: Good answer with clear reasoning. To improve, use more formal linking words and avoid casual phrases like 'most convenient gift ever given'.

예시: Yes, I believe chocolate is a convenient gift, especially for acquaintances. For instance, when visiting your boss for dinner and you are unsure of their preferences, giving chocolates is an appropriate and thoughtful choice.

× Guess I'm really fond of chocolates and I especially enjoy the ones with the nuts, for example almonds and raisins.

✓ Guess I'm really fond of chocolate and I especially enjoy the ones with nuts, for example almonds and raisins.

The word 'chocolates' is plural but generally 'chocolate' is used as an uncountable noun when referring to the substance or food in general. Also, 'nuts' should be plural without 'the' because it refers to nuts in general, not specific ones.

× Yes, as a kid I eat a lot of chocolate.

✓ Yes, as a kid I ate a lot of chocolate.

The sentence refers to a past time ('as a kid'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'ate' instead of the present tense 'eat'.

× For example, I got a lot of cavities that I had to go to dentist for.

✓ For example, I got a lot of cavities that I had to go to the dentist for.

The noun 'dentist' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific professional. The preposition 'to' is correctly used, but the article was missing.