Chocolate— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and provides me with energy to start a new day. I especially enjoy milk chocolate since it is neither too dark nor too sweet.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'I'm at chocolate' không đúng. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: I eat chocolate once a week, usually on weekends after finishing all my homework. I enjoy a chocolate bar to boost my energy and because I like the taste.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

예시: No, I didn't often eat chocolate as a child because my grandparents rarely bought sweets. They didn't know I liked chocolate and preferred to save money.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy.

예시: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes great, provides energy, and is often given as a gift to others.

제안: Bạn cần sửa lỗi từ vựng như 'too dog' thành 'too dark' và làm câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng từ ngữ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

예시: My favorite flavor is milk chocolate because I find dark chocolate too bitter and sweet chocolate too sugary. Milk chocolate has a balanced taste that I really enjoy.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'umm' và cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift because it tastes delicious and can give people a quick energy boost.

× Yes of course I like eating chocolate because it tastes delicious, it delicious and it provide energy for me for a new day.

✓ Yes, of course I like eating chocolate because it tastes delicious, it is delicious and it provides energy for me for a new day.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before 'delicious' and the verb 'provide' should be in third person singular form 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× And also I like milk chocolate because it not too dark and it not too sweet.

✓ And also I like milk chocolate because it is not too dark and it is not too sweet.

The verb 'is' is missing before 'not too dark' and 'not too sweet'. In English, the third person singular requires the verb 'to be' in the present tense to be included in such sentences.

× I'm at chocolate once a week in the weekend when I have done all my homework, I will eat a chocolate bar to boost my energy and because I like it.

✓ I eat chocolate once a week on the weekend. When I have done all my homework, I eat a chocolate bar to boost my energy because I like it.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and word choice ('I'm at chocolate'). The correct verb is 'eat'. Also, 'in the weekend' should be 'on the weekend'. The sentence is better split into two for clarity.

× No, I didn't often eat chocolate when I was a kid because my grandparents didn't bought it for me, didn't buy it for me.

✓ No, I didn't often eat chocolate when I was a kid because my grandparents didn't buy it for me.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'bought' is incorrect; it should be 'buy'. Also, the phrase 'didn't bought it for me, didn't buy it for me' is repetitive; only one is needed.

× They don't. They didn't know that I like chocolate so they rarely bought sweets beside they spend money.

✓ They didn't know that I liked chocolate, so they rarely bought sweets because they didn't want to spend money.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Like' should be 'liked' to match past tense context. 'Beside' is incorrect here; 'because' fits better. 'They spend money' should be 'they didn't want to spend money' for clarity.

× I think chocolate is popular around the world because it tastes great and it's also can provide energy for many people for a new day and it's also can be a gift for another.

✓ I think chocolate is popular around the world because it tastes great and it can also provide energy for many people for a new day, and it can also be a gift for others.

The modal verb 'can' should come before 'also' and the phrase 'for another' is incorrect; 'for others' is appropriate. The sentence structure is improved by repositioning 'also'.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate is milk chocolate because I can't eat too dog and too sweet, so I choose milk chocolate.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is milk chocolate because I can't eat chocolate that is too dark or too sweet, so I choose milk chocolate.

'Too dog' is a typo and should be 'too dark'. Also, the sentence needs clarification by adding 'chocolate that is' before 'too dark or too sweet'.

× It's a medium and it tastes so good.

✓ It's medium and it tastes so good.

'A medium' is incorrect because 'medium' here is an adjective describing the intensity or type, not a noun. The article 'a' should be removed.

× Yes, of course. I think it's good to choose chocolate as a gift to others, umm, because it can boost another energy and also it tastes delicious.

✓ Yes, of course. I think it's good to choose chocolate as a gift for others because it can boost their energy and also tastes delicious.

'Another energy' is incorrect; 'their energy' is appropriate to refer to the energy of others. Also, 'gift to others' is better expressed as 'gift for others'. The sentence is made more natural by removing 'umm'.