Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Is I like singing”应为“I like singing”。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用，同时避免重复表达，如“can make me feel more confident and also can release my stress”可以简化。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I like singing because it helps me feel more confident and relieves my stress. For instance, when I feel anxious, I often sing alone in my bathroom, which allows me to express my emotions freely.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，如“had learned”应为“learned”或“have learned”，且句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议注意时态和语法的正确使用，避免拼写错误（如“Hobbit”应为“hobby”），并且使句子完整且逻辑清晰。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in junior high school. Our school offered singing classes because the government believes students should have their own hobbies.

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，且句子结尾不完整，缺少宾语。建议注意拼写和句子完整性，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer to sing for my friends because I feel more comfortable with them. However, most of the time, I sing alone since singing is a private activity and it can be a bit embarrassing to perform in front of others. For example, when I'm alone, I can express my feelings freely without any worries.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“make me inspire about this”表达不清晰，且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更准确的表达方式，注意句子结构和连接词的使用，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I agree that singing can bring happiness. When I feel upset or sad, I usually listen to music that inspires me. I believe the melody has a positive effect on my emotions.

× Is I like singing because they can make me feel more confident and also can release my stress.

✓ I like singing because it can make me feel more confident and also can release my stress.

句子中主语“I”前不需要“Is”，且代词“they”指代不明确，应使用单数代词“it”指代“singing”。

× when I feel very anxiety I will try to sing by myself in my bathroom because it can help me to yell out and make my emotion more.

✓ When I feel very anxious, I will try to sing by myself in my bathroom because it can help me to yell out and express my emotions more.

“anxiety”是名词，形容词应为“anxious”；“make my emotion more”表达不完整，应改为“express my emotions more”以表达情感的释放。

× Yes, I had learned how to sing when I was in the junior high school.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in junior high school.

此处描述过去的经历，使用一般过去时“learned”即可，不需要过去完成时“had learned”。

× Our school had provide some class to the people who want to learn singing because our governments think that the students should have their own Hobbit in and.

✓ Our school provided some classes to the people who want to learn singing because our government thinks that the students should have their own hobby.

“had provide”时态错误，应为“provided”；“some class”应为复数“some classes”；“governments”应为单数“government”；“Hobbit”拼写错误，应为“hobby”；句尾“in and”无意义，应删除。

× Maybe I want to sing for my friend because I feel more comfortable with them.

✓ Maybe I want to sing for my friends because I feel more comfortable with them.

“friend”单数与代词“them”复数不一致，应将“friend”改为复数“friends”。

× However, most of the time I sing for myself because seeing is a very private activity and it can be a little embarrassing to sing in front of others.

✓ However, most of the time I sing for myself because singing is a very private activity and it can be a little embarrassing to sing in front of others.

“seeing”应为“singing”，动名词拼写错误。

× For example, when I'm alone, I can express my feeling fairly without worrying about.

✓ For example, when I'm alone, I can express my feelings freely without worrying about it.

“feeling”应为复数“feelings”；“fairly”用词不当，应为“freely”；“worrying about”后需有宾语，补充“it”。

× Yes I agree about it because in most of time when I feel upset or sad I will choose to listen some music which can make me inspire about this and the I think the melody also can have some positive effect on my emotion.

✓ Yes, I agree with it because most of the time when I feel upset or sad, I will choose to listen to some music which can inspire me, and I think the melody can also have some positive effect on my emotions.

“agree about”应为“agree with”；“in most of time”应为“most of the time”；“listen some music”应为“listen to some music”；“make me inspire about this”表达不当，应为“inspire me”；“the I think”多余，应删除；“emotion”应为复数“emotions”。