Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。意味が伝わりにくいため、簡潔で明確な文を作る練習をしましょう。例えば、"I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy."のように、理由をはっきり述べることが大切です。

예시: I like singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood. When I sing, I feel comfortable and happy.

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。時制の一致や動詞の形に注意し、簡潔に答えましょう。例えば、"I learned how to sing in junior high and high school. It helped me sing with my friends, and I want to learn more."のように表現すると良いです。

예시: I learned how to sing when I was in junior high and high school. It helped me sing songs with my friends, and I want to improve my singing skills further.

제안: 話がまとまっておらず、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由や状況を簡潔に説明しましょう。例えば、"I want to sing for my family on their birthdays because it is a tradition in Japan to sing birthday songs."のように答えると良いです。

예시: I want to sing for my family, especially on their birthdays. In Japan, it is common to sing birthday songs to celebrate, and I enjoy doing that.

제안: 回答が繰り返しで不自然です。主語や動詞の使い方に注意し、理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、"I think singing brings happiness because it helps people relax and feel good."のように表現すると良いです。

예시: I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and feel comfortable.

× I like singing because it can.

✓ I like singing because it can help me.

The sentence uses 'it can' without a main verb following 'can', which is incorrect. Modal verbs like 'can' must be followed by a base verb to express ability or possibility. Adding 'help me' completes the meaning.

× When I was junior high school and high school student I have learned how to singing and it can it helps me when I sing a song at color OK with my friend.

✓ When I was a junior high school and high school student, I learned how to sing and it helps me when I sing a song at karaoke with my friend.

The phrase 'how to singing' is incorrect because after 'how to' the base form of the verb should be used, not the -ing form. Also, 'have learned' is changed to 'learned' to match the past time reference. 'Color OK' is corrected to 'karaoke' for clarity.

× So I want to learn more how to singing.

✓ So I want to learn more how to sing.

After 'how to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the -ing form. Therefore, 'singing' should be corrected to 'sing'.

× I want to sing for my family especially then birthday, uh, in Japan, uh, when the birthday, the family usually sing birthday song for them.

✓ I want to sing for my family, especially on their birthdays. In Japan, when it's someone's birthday, the family usually sings a birthday song for them.

The preposition 'then' is incorrect; it should be 'their' to indicate possession. Also, 'on' is the correct preposition to use with 'birthday'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I want to think birthday song with for my family and I want to celebrate.

✓ So I want to sing a birthday song for my family and I want to celebrate.

The phrase 'think birthday song with for' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'sing a birthday song for'. The verb 'think' is inappropriate here; 'sing' fits the context.

× I think thinking can bring happiness to people because uh, when I sing a song I can relax and feel comfortable. So it can brings happiness because it can.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because, when I sing a song, I can relax and feel comfortable. So it can bring happiness because it can.

'Thinking' should be 'singing' to match the context. Also, 'it can brings' is incorrect; after modal 'can', the base verb 'bring' should be used, not 'brings'.