Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like "us singing" and "do a singing."

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax. Whenever I have free time, I like to sing my favourite songs to lift my mood.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details. Avoid filler words like "uh" and incorrect phrases such as "there are the one lecture."

예시: Yes, I took music classes when I was a student at school. In those classes, we had a special lesson focused on singing techniques.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be expanded with more details and linking words to make it more natural and effective. Explain why you want to sing with your friend to enrich your response.

예시: I want to sing with my friend because we both enjoy music and it’s fun to share that experience together.

제안: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and vocabulary mistakes, and by providing specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like "data singing" and "girl song."

예시: Yes, I believe singing is very important for everyone because it helps to relax the mind and relieve stress, making people feel happier.

× Yes, I love us singing.

✓ Yes, I love singing.

The pronoun 'us' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is to say 'I love singing' without 'us' because 'us' is an object pronoun and does not fit in this context.

× I usually do a singing.

✓ I usually sing.

The phrase 'do a singing' is incorrect. 'Singing' is an uncountable noun or a verb, so 'do a singing' is not appropriate. The correct expression is 'I usually sing.'

× I took a musical classes when I was, uh, when I was a school student because there are the one lecture of the singing.

✓ I took musical classes when I was a school student because there was one singing lecture.

The phrase 'a musical classes' is incorrect because 'classes' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'there are the one lecture' is incorrect; it should be 'there was one lecture' to match singular subject and past tense.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing with?

The preposition 'for' is incorrect in this context. When referring to singing together, the correct preposition is 'with'.

× I want to sing with my friend.

✓ I want to sing with my friends.

If the intention is to refer to more than one friend, 'friends' (plural) should be used. If only one friend is meant, the sentence is correct as is.

× Yes, I think data singing is a very important for each and every person because when we sing girl song then our mind become a relax and the fresh from any stressed.

✓ Yes, I think singing is very important for every person because when we sing a song, our mind becomes relaxed and refreshed from any stress.

The word 'data' is incorrect here and should be removed. 'Girl song' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'a song' is appropriate. 'Become a relax' is incorrect; it should be 'becomes relaxed'. 'The fresh' should be 'refreshed'. 'Any stressed' should be 'any stress'. Also, 'each and every person' can be simplified to 'every person'.