Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“enjoy saying”应为“enjoy singing”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性，避免重复词汇，使用更准确的表达。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because I believe I have a natural talent for it. When I was very young, I could easily remember song lyrics and melodies. I still remember going to karaoke with my dad, and his friends were surprised that I could read the lyrics so well.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“how you sing”应为“how to sing”，“I self learns”应为“I teach myself”。建议加强语法基础，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更流畅。

예시: No, I have never attended professional singing classes, but I am very interested in learning. I usually teach myself by using apps and watching instructional videos online.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，如“self entertainment”应为“self-entertainment”或“a way to entertain myself”，且句子不够连贯。建议简化表达，注意句子结构和词汇搭配。

예시: I don't usually sing for others because singing is more like a way to entertain myself. I often sing in the car, outside, or at home when I have free time, and it helps me to relax and recharge.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但存在发音和用词错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，且句子结构稍显简单。建议注意发音准确性，丰富词汇，使用更自然的表达。

예시: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Every time I sing for about an hour at home or in the car, I feel refreshed. It helps me release energy and makes me feel calm from the inside out.

× I enjoy saying because I think I have a talent on that.

✓ I enjoy singing because I think I have a talent for that.

这里'saying'是动词的现在分词形式，但语境中应使用'singing'，表示喜欢唱歌。'on that'应改为'for that'，表示对某事有天赋。

× When I was very young, I can easily remember the lyrics and and the tongues of the music.

✓ When I was very young, I could easily remember the lyrics and the tunes of the music.

句子描述过去的能力，应该用过去时态的情态动词'could'，而不是现在时的'can'。

× and and the tongues of the music.

✓ and the tunes of the music.

这里'tongues'应为'tunes'，表示音乐的曲调，属于词汇错误。

× I think I have a talent on that.

✓ I think I have a talent for that.

表达对某事有天赋时，正确的介词是'for'，而不是'on'。

× can can she read the lyric?

✓ can she read the lyrics?

'lyric'应为复数形式'lyrics'，表示歌词。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语，'learned'是美式英语，两者均可，但需保持一致。此处可接受。

× I have not attended any professional singing classes while I I am quite interested in learning how you sing.

✓ I have not attended any professional singing classes, but I am quite interested in learning how to sing.

'while'用法不当，应改为'but'表示转折；'how you sing'应为'how to sing'，表示学习唱歌的方法。

× So I learned I self learns in through apps or through some uh, umm, some videos of teaching and about how to think.

✓ So I learned by myself through apps or some teaching videos about how to sing.

'I self learns'语法错误，应为'I learned by myself'；'videos of teaching and about how to think'表达不清，应为'teaching videos about how to sing'。

× I don't want to sing for anybody. For me, singing is, is more like a self entertainment.

✓ I don't want to sing for anybody. For me, singing is more like self-entertainment.

'a self entertainment'应为不可数名词'self-entertainment'，不加冠词。

× Uh, uh, apply is that I what I'm saying?

✓ Uh, that's what I'm saying.

原句语法混乱，应简化为'That's what I'm saying.'，表达清晰。

× I, I usually singing just at the cars or outside or even at home.

✓ I usually sing just in the car, outside, or even at home.

'usually singing'应为一般现在时'sing'；'at the cars'应为'in the car'。

× I have some free time. I quite I found it to quite recharge.

✓ When I have some free time, I find it quite recharging.

句子结构不完整，应补充条件状语；'to quite recharge'表达不当，应为'quite recharging'。

× I think seeing would bring happiness to people.

✓ I think singing would bring happiness to people.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示唱歌。

× I feel so refreshing every time when I sing for quite like an hour at home or in the car.

✓ I feel so refreshed every time I sing for about an hour at home or in the car.

'refreshing'是形容事物的，形容人的感受应为'feeling refreshed'；'quite like an hour'表达不当，应为'about an hour'。

× I think it can just release your energy and makes you feel calm from inside out.

✓ I think it can just release your energy and make you feel calm from inside out.

并列动词应保持一致，'release'后面动词应为原形'make'，而不是'makes'。