Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to be more confident and clear in your sentences, avoid filler words like 'umm', and correct phrases such as 'I like confidence' to 'I lack confidence'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid repetition.

예시: No, I do not like singing because I lack confidence in my singing abilities. Whenever I am asked to sing in front of people, I feel shy and embarrassed. Therefore, I usually avoid singing in public or competitions.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid informal expressions like 'not my cup of tea' in formal speaking tests. Provide a bit more detail about your experience.

예시: Yes, I tried learning how to sing when I was younger by taking music lessons. My instructor taught me to play the harmonium, a traditional musical instrument, and proper singing techniques. Although I initially enjoyed the lessons, I soon realized that singing was not my strong suit.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrases like 'singing facilities' instead of 'singing skills'. Also, try to avoid repeating ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Be careful with grammar and sentence structure.

예시: Although I am not fond of singing, if I had the talent and confidence, I would love to sing for my family because they are very supportive. It would be a great way to express my feelings and perhaps impress my brother with my singing skills.

제안: Your answer is well-structured and informative. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and ensure grammatical accuracy, such as 'singing can bring happiness' instead of 'singing and bring happiness'. Also, use linking words like 'for instance' instead of 'for example' to vary your language.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to many people because it releases endorphins in the body, which help reduce stress and evoke positive emotions. For instance, many people enjoy singing in the shower to relax and boost their mood. Overall, singing is a fun and effective way to feel more energetic and joyful.

× I like confidence in my singing abilities.

✓ I like to have confidence in my singing abilities.

The original sentence uses 'like confidence' which is incorrect because 'like' should be followed by a verb or a noun phrase that fits the context. Here, 'to have confidence' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× I'm not very comfort.

✓ I'm not very comfortable.

The word 'comfort' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe the feeling. 'Comfortable' is the correct adjective form to use here.

× which is a traditional music instrument

✓ which is a traditional musical instrument

The phrase 'music instrument' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'musical' to describe the instrument.

× It would be great way to express my feelings

✓ It would be a great way to express my feelings

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'great way' which is necessary to make the phrase grammatically correct.

× maybe even make my brother a little jealous of my singing facilities.

✓ maybe even make my brother a little jealous of my singing abilities.

The word 'facilities' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'abilities' to refer to skills or talents.

× singing and bring happiness to many people

✓ singing can bring happiness to many people

The sentence is missing the modal verb 'can' to correctly express the ability or possibility, which is necessary here.

× singing is fun and effective way to feel more energetic and joyful.

✓ singing is a fun and effective way to feel more energetic and joyful.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'fun and effective way' which is required to make the phrase grammatically correct.