Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni uttor e kichu bhul shobdo babohar korechen, jemon 'Sydney' er jaygay 'singing' bola uchit chilo. Apnar uttor ke aro prokritik o sohoje bujha jaoya moto korte, shobdo gulo shothik bhabe babohar korun ebong proyojon moto sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhun.

예시: Yes, I love singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. When I was a child, I took singing lessons, but now I am very busy and don't have much time to practice. Singing helps me relieve stress and enjoy my free time.

제안: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu 'Uh' moto filler word gulo porihor korun. Apni linking words babohar kore sentence gulo ke aro shongjogito korte paren, jemon 'although' ba 'but'. Ete uttor ta aro prokritik o shundor hobe.

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was a child, I used to practice regularly because I really enjoyed it. Although I have a hectic schedule now, I still love singing whenever I get the chance.

제안: Apni 'wanted' er jaygay 'want' babohar korben karon proshno present tense e. 'stand our bond' phrase ta vul, apni 'strengthen our bond' bolte paren. Apnar uttor ke aro prokritik korte, specific linking words babohar korun.

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she has always supported and encouraged me to follow my dreams. Singing for her would be a way to show my gratitude and make her feel special. I think she would really enjoy it, and it would strengthen our bond.

제안: Apni kichu grammar error korechen, jemon 'can brings' er jaygay 'can bring' hobe, 'displace' er jaygay 'express' bhalo hobe. Apni linking words babohar kore sentence gulo ke aro logical korte paren.

예시: Yes, definitely. I believe singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, when I sing with my friends or family, everyone feels more relaxed and joyful, which creates a positive and uplifting atmosphere.

× When I was a child I took singing lesson but nowadays I am very busy so I don't have much time to practice.

✓ When I was a child I took singing lessons but nowadays I am very busy so I don't have much time to practice.

The word 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons' because it refers to multiple sessions. This is a singular and plural issue, but since the main verb tense is correct, the focus is on plural form correction.

× However, I believe Sydney is a great way to feel happier and it also helps to relieve stress.

✓ However, I believe singing is a great way to feel happier and it also helps to relieve stress.

'Sydney' is a wrong word here; the intended word is 'singing'. This is a lexical error rather than a preposition error, but since 'Sydney' is incorrect, it must be corrected to 'singing' to make sense.

× Yes, I have learned how to sing.

✓ Yes, I have learnt how to sing.

Both 'learned' and 'learnt' are acceptable past participle forms of 'learn'. However, 'learnt' is more common in British English, which fits the context better. This is a stylistic choice rather than a strict grammar error.

× I wanted to sing for my mother because she has always supported me and encouraged me to follow my dreams.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because she has always supported me and encouraged me to follow my dreams.

The question is in present tense 'Who do you want to sing for?', so the answer should be in present tense 'I want' instead of past tense 'I wanted'. This is a tense issue.

× I would stand our bond.

✓ I would strengthen our bond.

The phrase 'stand our bond' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'strengthen our bond' to convey the intended meaning. This is an incorrect use of verbs and collocations.

× I believe singing can brings a lot of happiness to people because it helps them displace their emotion and relieve their stress.

✓ I believe singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because it helps them displace their emotions and relieve their stress.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'brings' should be 'bring'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the plural subject 'people'. This is a third person singular issue and singular/plural issue.

× For example, when I sing with my friend or family, everyone feel more relaxed and joyful which create a positive and uplift atmosphere.

✓ For example, when I sing with my friend or family, everyone feels more relaxed and joyful which creates a positive and uplifting atmosphere.

The subject 'everyone' is singular, so the verbs should be 'feels' and 'creates'. Also, 'uplift' should be the adjective 'uplifting' to describe 'atmosphere'. This involves subject-verb agreement and incorrect use of adjectives.