Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I prefer quiet environments. Singing feels noisy to me, so I usually avoid it.

제안: 回答内容不够连贯，表达不清楚。建议使用连词连接句子，清晰表达原因。

예시: No, I have never learned to sing because my parents encouraged me to focus on my major subjects instead.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，内容不连贯。建议直接回答问题并用具体细节支持。

예시: I would like to sing for my son because he is a cute little boy who always looks for me after school.

제안: 回答不够明确，表达含糊。建议直接回答问题并用具体理由支持。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and express their emotions.

× Sometimes I'm singing.

✓ Sometimes I sing.

这里使用现在进行时（I'm singing）不符合语境，表达的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时（I sing）。

× A song is too noise for me.

✓ A song is too noisy for me.

'noise'是名词，形容词应使用'noisy'，表示'吵闹的'。

× I'm a the person who likes quiet.

✓ I'm the person who likes quiet.

冠词'a'和'the'不能连用，应选择其中一个。此处用'the'表示特指。

× No, I have never learned how to sing because I never have a chance.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I have never had a chance.

'never have a chance'时态错误，应使用现在完成时的过去分词'have had'，表示从过去到现在都没有机会。

× My son, he is a cute little boy. She he always learning.

✓ My son, he is a cute little boy. He is always learning.

'She he'是错误的代词使用，应为'He'，且缺少动词'is'。

× He always sounds for me after school.

✓ He always calls for me after school.

'sounds for'用法错误，正确表达应为'calls for'，表示'来接我'。

× Yet yes, of course sometimes I also can obtain happiness from thinking.

✓ Yes, of course, sometimes I can also obtain happiness from thinking.

'Yet yes'搭配不当，应直接用'Yes'；'also'位置调整以符合英语习惯。