Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and make your answer more concise and natural. Also, directly answer the question first, then add supporting details with linking words for coherence.

예시: I don't sing much these days, but I used to love singing folk songs when I was a child. For example, my favorite singer was Jagjit Singh, whose songs inspired me a lot.

제안: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'although' or 'however' to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Although I never had professional singing training, I enjoyed singing on my own as a child. I also followed some singers and sang occasionally whenever I had free time.

제안: Try to make your answer more fluent by reducing repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: Even though I don't have a good singing voice, I would love to sing for my wife because I believe it would make her very happy.

제안: Reduce filler words and improve grammar for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to explain your reasons logically.

예시: Yes, I strongly believe singing brings happiness because it calms the mind and provides a chance to relax after a hard day's work.

× Honestly, I never did professional training on singing.

✓ Honestly, I never had professional training in singing.

The original sentence uses 'did' incorrectly with 'professional training'. The correct past perfect form is 'had professional training'. Also, the preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to training in a subject.

× However, I loved singing uh, by my own when I was kid and even at a young age.

✓ However, I loved singing by myself when I was a kid and even at a young age.

The phrase 'by my own' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'by myself'. Also, 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'.

× Honestly, I never did professional training on singing.

✓ Honestly, I never had professional training in singing.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'training' is 'in'.

× Also, uh, I followed some singers and sometime whenever I had time, I used to just, uh, sing a little.

✓ Also, uh, I followed some singers and sometimes whenever I had time, I used to just, uh, sing a little.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× Uh, yes, I strongly believe that singing can bring happiness to people because it, uh, give calm to your mind and you and, and from all day hard work, it gives you a chance to relax.

✓ Uh, yes, I strongly believe that singing can bring happiness to people because it, uh, gives calm to your mind and you and, and from all day hard work, it gives you a chance to relax.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.