Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的表达方式，并避免重复和冗余。可以简洁明了地表达不喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: I don't like singing because I am not good at music. I can't keep the melody or rhythm, so people often tell me to stop singing.

제안: 回答中语法和用词不准确，建议使用更自然的表达，并且注意时态和单复数形式。可以更具体地描述音乐课的情况。

예시: Yes, in my country, music classes are important in elementary school, but the teacher usually just asks us to sing together without teaching any techniques or skills.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并且避免重复。

예시: I want to sing for my girlfriend because she always supports me and thinks my singing is wonderful, even though I know it's not very good.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地表达观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness. When I feel happy, I often express it by singing, although I don't like singing in public.

× I don't have the melody or the rhythm about the music.

✓ I don't have the melody or the rhythm of the music.

这里的介词使用错误，应该用“of”来表示“关于”的意思，而不是“about”。根据题目要求，只纠正符合语法问题类型的错误，介词错误对应类型11。

× So everyone call me stop singing again.

✓ So everyone calls me to stop singing again.

主语everyone是单数，谓语动词call应使用第三人称单数形式calls。此外，动词后应加不定式to stop，表示动作目的。

× Yeah, in my country the music class is the important class for elementary school, but the music teacher always just tell us to sing together without any technique, skill, teaching.

✓ Yeah, in my country the music class is an important class for elementary school, but the music teacher always just tells us to sing together without any technique, skill, or teaching.

主语the music teacher是单数，谓语动词tell应改为第三人称单数形式tells。并且列举时应加连词or。

× The only one person I want to say to is my girlfriend, who always support me and think that my music is the wonderful, the best in the world, although I know my music is very poor and hard to listen.

✓ The only person I want to talk to is my girlfriend, who always supports me and thinks that my music is wonderful, the best in the world, although I know my music is very poor and hard to listen to.

动词support和think应使用第三人称单数形式supports和thinks。表达“想对某人说”应使用短语“talk to”。形容词前不加定冠词“the”。“hard to listen”应为“hard to listen to”。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people definitely because when I was very happy or happiness, I always use singing to express my happy.

✓ Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because when I was very happy, I always used singing to express my happiness.

副词definitely应放在情态动词can之后。过去时态应使用used。表达“表达我的快乐”应使用名词happiness。

× Although I didn't like to sing in the public.

✓ Although I didn't like to sing in public.

短语“in public”不需要定冠词the。根据题目要求，只纠正符合语法问题类型的错误，去掉the属于冠词错误，类型22。