Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response to the question with clear reasons and avoid irrelevant or confusing details. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

예시: Yes, I like singing very much because it reminds me of my childhood. I especially enjoy singing Hindi songs as they are very melodious and meaningful to me.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand and does not directly answer the question. Please try to give a clear and concise response about your experience learning to sing, using correct grammar and vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I have taken singing lessons before. I learned many techniques to improve my voice and enjoy singing more.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please answer directly who you want to sing for and give some details about why. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I want to sing for my wife because she loves music. Sometimes she tells me that my singing makes her happy.

제안: Your answer is confusing and hard to follow. Please try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons or examples. Use simple and correct sentences to make your answer natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. It helps me feel fresh and removes sadness. However, I prefer not to sing sad songs because they make me feel hesitant.

× Yes, I love Devil Siri because my childhood and was uh, my wife so beautiful and most often I like Hindi song.

✓ Yes, I loved Devil Siri because of my childhood, and my wife was so beautiful. Most often, I like Hindi songs.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Love' should be 'loved' to refer to past feelings, and 'was' needs a clear subject. Also, 'Hindi song' should be plural as it refers to songs in general.

× Yes, I love Devil Siri because my childhood and was uh, my wife so beautiful and most often I like Hindi song.

✓ Yes, I loved Devil Siri because of my childhood, and my wife was so beautiful. Most often, I like Hindi songs.

The phrase 'because my childhood' lacks the preposition 'of' to connect the reason properly.

× Most often I like Hindi song.

✓ Most often, I like Hindi songs.

'Song' should be plural 'songs' when referring to songs in general.

× Yes, I learn too much after my singing.

✓ Yes, I learned a lot after my singing lessons.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to indicate completed action in the past.

× Uh, most of them, uh, give you up to me.

✓ Uh, most of them, uh, gave up on me.

The phrase 'give you up to me' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'gave up on me' meaning they stopped supporting or helping.

× I don't think the song becomes but it's so bad.

✓ I don't think the song becomes good; it's actually very bad.

The sentence is unclear and incomplete; it needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I like singing in my favorite songs to say that's it.

✓ I like singing my favorite songs, that's it.

The phrase 'singing in my favorite songs' is incorrect; it should be 'singing my favorite songs'.

× I went to Bangalore.

✓ I went to Bangalore.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× I would prefer to.

✓ I would prefer to go there.

The sentence is incomplete; the pronoun 'to' needs an object to complete the meaning.

× Literally my wife very favorite uh song.

✓ Literally, my wife's very favorite song.

The possessive form 'wife's' is needed to show ownership of the favorite song.

× This is name uh, I believe she was told me sometime I singing a song and that's it.

✓ The song's name is, uh, I believe she told me sometime that I was singing a song, and that's it.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it needs restructuring for clarity and correct tense usage.

× Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

✓ Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Yes, I think in January happiness to people with proceeding uh, my my fresh.

✓ Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people and refreshes them.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words; it needs to be rephrased for clarity and correct meaning.

× I'm from depression removed.

✓ It removes depression from me.

The phrase 'I'm from depression removed' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'It removes depression from me'.

× I'm not acceptable or singing a sad song because it's hesitation and more so it does all this time and also.

✓ I don't prefer singing sad songs because they cause hesitation and sadness all the time.

The sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and expressions; it needs to be rephrased for clarity and correct pronoun usage.