Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Yes, I do. Singing is my entertainment activities, uh, when I go to school, I have many subjects, so I have a stretch, a stretch, singing, uh, help me relax after the tired day.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, singing is a relaxing activity for me after a tiring day. I usually listen to my favorite songs and then sing along, which help me if you came and happy.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
I usually sing along. Besides that I want to sing for my family. They already started to hear me when I sing uh, they uh, kofutoi there.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, you know, uh, I like singing when I go home after the tiring day at the school singing help me relax and give me some happiness.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 55.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về việc hát giúp bạn thư giãn như thế nào sau một ngày học tập căng thẳng.
예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a long day at school. When I have many subjects to study, singing gives me a break and refreshes my mind.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 60.0제안: Bạn nên tránh những câu không rõ nghĩa và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn về việc bạn học hát như thế nào và cảm nhận của bạn khi hát.
예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, I enjoy singing along to my favorite songs because it helps me feel happy and relaxed after a tiring day.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 40.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều từ không hiểu được. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn muốn hát cho ai và cảm xúc của bạn khi hát cho họ.
예시: I usually sing alone, but I would like to sing for my family because they always support me and enjoy my singing.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 50.0제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết và nói rõ ràng hơn về quan điểm của mình. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.
예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, after a tiring day at school, singing helps me relax and feel joyful.
문법
× Singing is my entertainment activities, uh, when I go to school, I have many subjects, so I have a stretch, a stretch, singing, uh, help me relax after the tired day.
✓ Singing is my entertainment activity. When I go to school, I have many subjects, so I have a break. Singing helps me relax after a tiring day.
The word 'activities' should be singular 'activity' because 'Singing' is singular. 'A stretch' is unclear and should be replaced with 'a break' for clarity. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'Singing'. 'The tired day' should be 'a tiring day' to correctly describe the day.
× I usually listen to my favorite songs and then sing along, which help me if you came and happy.
✓ I usually listen to my favorite songs and then sing along, which helps me feel calm and happy.
The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'which'. The phrase 'if you came and happy' is incorrect and unclear; it should be replaced with 'feel calm and happy' to convey the intended meaning.
× They already started to hear me when I sing uh, they uh, kofutoi there.
✓ They have already started to hear me when I sing, but they are not very interested.
The original sentence is unclear and contains non-standard words ('kofutoi'). It is corrected to a clear sentence with proper verb tense and meaning. 'Started' is changed to 'have started' for present perfect tense indicating recent action.
× I like singing when I go home after the tiring day at the school singing help me relax and give me some happiness.
✓ I like singing when I go home after a tiring day at school. Singing helps me relax and gives me some happiness.
'The tiring day' should be 'a tiring day' as it is a general statement. 'At the school' should be 'at school' without 'the'. 'Singing help' should be 'Singing helps' to agree with singular subject. 'Give' should be 'gives' for subject-verb agreement.
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