Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中多次将'singing'误说成'saying'，影响了表达的准确性。建议加强发音练习，特别是区分类似单词的发音。此外，回答时应避免重复表达相同意思，语言更简洁自然。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult and I feel nervous performing in front of people. I lack confidence when singing publicly.

제안: 回答内容较为简单，且有重复词汇（"they they"），影响流畅度。建议回答时注意语法和用词准确，增加细节描述，使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, I have. During junior and senior high school, we had music classes where the teacher taught us basic singing techniques and played songs for us to practice.

제안: 回答结构较好，但语言稍显重复（"confidence and the support"），建议使用更丰富的词汇表达感情，同时注意句子简洁。

예시: If I had to choose, I would sing for my mother because she has always been my biggest supporter and encourages me to be confident.

제안: 回答中多次将'singing'误说成'seeing'或'saying'，影响理解。建议加强发音和词汇准确性练习。同时，回答内容可以更具体，避免模糊表达。

예시: Yes, I believe singing helps people relax and feel happy. When someone sings well, it can make them feel like they are on cloud nine.

× No, I don't like saying.

✓ No, I don't like singing.

这里的动词应该是表示唱歌的动作，正确的动词是'sing'，其动名词形式是'singing'，而'saying'表示说话，不符合语境。

× I don't enjoy saying songs because I find saying is difficult for me and I'm afraid of staying in front of a group of people.

✓ I don't enjoy singing songs because I find singing is difficult for me and I'm afraid of standing in front of a group of people.

动词'say'的动名词是'saying'，但这里表达的是唱歌，应该用'sing'的动名词'singing'。另外，'staying'表示停留，语境中应为'站立'，故用'standing'。

× Yes I have. I remember when I was in Senior High School and junior high school we had music class and a music teacher taught us some basic knowledge about how to sing.

✓ Yes, I have. I remember when I was in senior high school and junior high school, we had music class and a music teacher taught us some basic knowledge about how to sing.

这里主要是标点和大小写问题，'Senior High School'和'junior high school'应统一大小写，且句中应加逗号以分隔句子，使句子更通顺。

× Like they they played us some songs for us to listen.

✓ For example, they played some songs for us to listen to.

原句结构不完整且重复，'Like they they'重复且不合适，应该用'For example'引出例子，'played us some songs'应改为'played some songs for us to listen to'，使句子完整且符合英语表达习惯。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合英语表达习惯。

× Technically, if I were to choose one person that I want to sing for, it would be definitely my mother because my mother has always been my biggest supporter and she always gives me some confidence and the support.

✓ Technically, if I were to choose one person to sing for, it would definitely be my mother because she has always been my biggest supporter and always gives me confidence and support.

'that I want to sing for'结构冗长，改为'to sing for'更简洁。'it would be definitely'顺序错误，应为'it would definitely be'。'gives me some confidence and the support'中'some'和'the'用法不当，改为'confidence and support'更自然。

× Yes, I do, because seeing is a good way for people to unwind their pressure and give people a sense of happiness and satisfaction when somebody is saying it feels like he or she is on the moon.

✓ Yes, I do, because singing is a good way for people to unwind their pressure and give people a sense of happiness and satisfaction. When somebody is singing, it feels like he or she is on the moon.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示唱歌。'somebody is saying'应为'somebody is singing'。此外，句子过长，分成两句更清晰。