Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has good ideas but the language is a bit unnatural and some phrases are unclear. Try to use simpler, clearer expressions and avoid awkward phrases like 'singing is agreed with express emotions'. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. Singing improves my mood and boosts my confidence. Recently, I have joined some singing groups which I really enjoy.

제안: Your answer contains some hesitation and grammatical errors. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use correct verb tenses. Also, organise your answer logically with linking words to make it clearer and more coherent.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing as a hobby and practice regularly. I discovered my voice by singing my favourite songs while washing the dishes. Moreover, I have participated in local singing competitions and take lessons through online apps like Star Maker.

제안: Your answer is thoughtful but some sentences are unclear or awkward, such as 'I would like to see for somebody special'. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

예시: I have never thought about singing on stage for someone. I usually sing my favourite songs for myself. However, I would like to sing for someone special to express my feelings because music can convey emotions better than words. It can help strengthen personal and professional connections.

제안: Your answer has good points but contains hesitation and some unclear phrases like 'self consequence'. Try to avoid filler words and use clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: From my experience, singing is a great way to express emotions and relieve stress. Many people sing in the shower or car, even if they are not confident about their singing ability. Additionally, karaoke is a popular activity that brings joy to many people.

× In my perspective, singing is agreed with express emotions and relieve stress.

✓ From my perspective, singing is agreed to express emotions and relieve stress.

The phrase 'In my perspective' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'From my perspective'. Also, 'agreed with express emotions' is incorrect; it should be 'agreed to express emotions' because 'agree to' is the correct verb-preposition combination here.

× I have participated singing with grooves in recent months which really strike my right note.

✓ I have participated in singing with groups in recent months which really strike my right note.

The verb 'participate' requires the preposition 'in' before the activity. Also, 'grooves' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'groups'.

× I found my voice when I was used to singing my favorite songs while washing the dishes.

✓ I found my voice when I used to sing my favourite songs while washing the dishes.

The phrase 'was used to singing' is incorrect here; 'used to' followed by the base verb 'sing' is the correct form to express a past habitual action. Also, 'favourite' is the Australian English spelling.

× However, I'm still participated in local singing competitions.

✓ However, I still participate in local singing competitions.

The phrase 'I'm still participated' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I still participate' to indicate ongoing action in the present tense.

× In addition, I take the lessons from online apps such as Star Maker or related to singing.

✓ In addition, I take lessons from online apps such as Star Maker related to singing.

The article 'the' before 'lessons' is unnecessary here. Also, 'or related to singing' is awkward; it should be 'related to singing' to modify 'apps' properly.

× I never thought about singing in the stage for someone.

✓ I never thought about singing on the stage for someone.

The correct preposition with 'stage' is 'on', not 'in'. So, it should be 'singing on the stage'.

× I like singing more of my favorite songs.

✓ I like singing my favourite songs more.

The phrase 'singing more of my favorite songs' is awkward and incorrect. The correct structure is 'singing my favourite songs more' to express preference.

× Despite that, I would like to see for somebody special to express my feelings.

✓ Despite that, I would like to sing for somebody special to express my feelings.

The verb 'see' is incorrect here; it should be 'sing'. Also, 'sing for somebody special' is the correct phrase.

× Many people sing UH in the shower or car even if they hesitate with self consequence about the singing ability.

✓ Many people sing in the shower or car even if they hesitate due to self-consciousness about their singing ability.

The phrase 'sing UH' is unclear and likely a filler; it should be removed. Also, 'hesitate with self consequence' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'hesitate due to self-consciousness'. Additionally, 'their' should be used instead of 'the' to refer to 'singing ability'.