Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有多处拼写错误，如"seeing"应为"singing"，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意单词拼写和语法，避免重复表达，并使用更连贯的连接词。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For instance, when I'm feeling stressed, singing my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood. Moreover, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.

제안: 回答中"tour"用词不当，应为"course"或"class"，且"MU music"不明确。建议使用准确词汇，避免模糊表达，并注意语法细节。

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I took part in a course where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm. These singing lessons helped me improve my confidence and enjoy music more deeply.

제안: 句子结构较长且重复，建议简化表达，注意主谓一致，如"create"应为"creates"，并使用更自然的连接词。

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better. Moreover, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere that strengthens our bond.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如"sing"应为"singing"，"chore"用词不当，应为"choir"。建议注意词性和词汇准确性，提升表达自然度。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. It allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, especially when done with others in a group or choir. For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, which helps improve their mood.

× Yes, I really enjoy seeing because it help me relax and express my emotions.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

动词enjoy后应接动名词形式，不能用see的现在分词seeing；另外，主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词help应加-s变为helps。

× because it help me relax and express my emotions.

✓ because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词help应加-s变为helps。

× For example, when I'm feeling stressed, seeing my favorite songs instantly leaves my mood.

✓ For example, when I'm feeling stressed, singing my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood.

此处应使用动名词singing表示唱歌的动作；seeing意为“看见”，不符合语境；另外，动词leaves my mood用法错误，应改为lifts my mood表示提升心情。

× Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gathering.

✓ Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.

名词gathering应使用复数形式gatherings，表示多次社交聚会。

× When I was in school, I took part in a tour where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythms.

✓ When I was in school, I took part in a tour where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm.

rhythm是不可数名词，不应加复数-s。

× which motivates me to perform better.

✓ which motivates me to perform better.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Moreover, sharing music with loved ones create a warm and joyful atmosphere that strengthens our bond.

✓ Moreover, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere that strengthens our bond.

主语sharing是第三人称单数，谓语动词create应加-s变为creates。

× Yes, I believe sing can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

believe后应接动名词singing，不能用动词原形sing。

× especially when done with others in a group or chore.

✓ especially when done with others in a group or choir.

单词chore（家务）用错，应为choir（合唱团）。

× For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, which help improve their mood.

✓ For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, which helps improve their mood.

关系代词which指代前面的单数名词songs的整体，谓语动词help应加-s变为helps。