Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and correct in your grammar. Avoid filler sounds like 'MMM' and focus on delivering a clear, natural response. For example, start with a direct answer and then explain briefly why.

예시: I like singing, but I'm not very good at it because I haven't practiced much. However, I enjoy it as a hobby.

제안: Your answer has repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid repeating words and use correct verb forms. Also, complete your sentences fully to make your answer clear and natural.

예시: No, I have never had the opportunity to learn how to sing, so I am still unable to sing well.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking, avoid filler words, and use correct grammar. Also, clarify your feelings and reasons more specifically.

예시: Even though I can't sing well, I would like to sing for my friends and family because I love them. Whenever I feel happy or relaxed, I try to sing for them.

제안: Your answer is good but could be improved by using smoother linking words and correcting some grammar. Try to make your examples more specific and your sentences more coherent.

예시: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when someone faces difficulties and feels depressed, singing their favorite song can help reduce stress and improve their mood.

× MMM actually I'm not very passionate about singing, although I like singing but I Can't Sing any songs because of lacking lack of my practice.

✓ MMM actually I'm not very passionate about singing. Although I like singing, I can't sing any songs because of lack of practice.

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'lack of my practice' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lack of practice'. Splitting the sentence improves clarity.

× Actually not, I have never uh, get got an opportunity to learn learn how to sing.

✓ Actually not, I have never got an opportunity to learn how to sing.

The phrase 'get got' is incorrect; 'have never got' is the correct past tense form. Also, repeating 'learn' is unnecessary.

× Therefore I still unable to unable to sing and.

✓ Therefore, I am still unable to sing.

The sentence is incomplete and has repeated words. Adding the verb 'am' and removing repetition corrects the sentence structure.

× Although I can't singing but uh, uh, if I had to sing for someone, uh, it would be my friends or family members because I love them and I whenever I feel baby and cool I try to sing for them.

✓ Although I can't sing, if I had to sing for someone, it would be my friends or family members because I love them. Whenever I feel happy and cool, I try to sing for them.

'Can't singing' is incorrect; it should be 'can't sing'. Also, 'although' and 'but' should not be used together. The phrase 'feel baby and cool' is incorrect; likely intended 'feel happy and cool'. Splitting into clearer sentences improves readability.