Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语音犹豫词（如"UH"），影响流畅度。"upwind"用词不当，应为"unwind"。"promote the renovations"表达不清，应具体说明唱歌如何促进友谊。建议避免语气词，使用准确词汇，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me unwind after a busy day. Moreover, singing with friends strengthens our friendship and creates a joyful atmosphere.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如"always listening"应为"always listen"。句子结构较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意时态和语法，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: To be honest, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, I enjoy listening to popular music and often sing along by following the rhythm and melody.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如"sing in when I'm single"不明确。建议简化句子，使用正确时态和表达，明确说明自己喜欢独自唱歌的原因。

예시: I usually prefer to sing alone because I am not confident in my singing skills. For example, I often sing in the bathroom when I take a bath.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，导致表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词如"so"、"which"等，使句子更流畅，同时注意语法和词汇的准确性。

예시: Yes, of course. When my friends and I feel stressed or emotional, we often go to KTV to sing many songs. This helps us relax and feel happier, reducing our pressure effectively.

× I always listening some popular music and with the music I will follow the rhythm and melody and sing it.

✓ I always listen to some popular music and with the music I will follow the rhythm and melody and sing it.

这里动词listen后面应该用原形动词形式，不能直接用动名词listening。动词listen后面通常接介词to，因此应改为listen to。

× I always listening some popular music and with the music I will follow the rhythm and melody and sing it.

✓ I always listen to some popular music and with the music I will follow the rhythm and melody and sing it.

动词listen后面需要加介词to，表示“听某物”，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× I like singing because UH singing is a good way to upwind and UH singing with other friends can promote the renovations.

✓ I like singing because singing is a good way to unwind and singing with other friends can promote the relationships.

单词upwind拼写错误，应为unwind，意思是放松。renovations意思是装修，不符合语境，应改为relationships，表示关系。

× I just want to sing in when I'm single and I love to singing in the bathroom when I was take a bath.

✓ I just want to sing when I'm alone and I love singing in the bathroom when I take a bath.

短语sing in when I'm single不合适，应该用sing when I'm alone表示独自唱歌。动词take a bath时态应为一般现在时，且love后接动名词singing。

× I love to singing in the bathroom when I was take a bath.

✓ I love singing in the bathroom when I take a bath.

这里时态不一致，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，was take应改为take。

× Maybe I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not good at singing so I just want to sing in when I'm single and I love to singing in the bathroom when I was take a bath.

✓ Maybe I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not good at singing, so I just want to sing when I'm alone and I love singing in the bathroom when I take a bath.

句子中缺少逗号分隔，且in when I'm single表达不准确，应改为when I'm alone。

× Yes of course, because when my friend and I feel stressful or emotional we always go to the KTV and we can sing many songs and then we will feel great and feel less pressure and relax and good.

✓ Yes, of course, because when my friend and I feel stressed or emotional, we always go to the KTV and sing many songs. Then we feel great, less pressure, relaxed, and good.

句子过长且连接词使用不当，应该分句表达。形容词stressful用错，应为stressed表示感到压力。动词feel后接形容词relaxed。

× when my friend and I feel stressful or emotional

✓ when my friend and I feel stressed or emotional

stressful是形容事物的，表示“有压力的”，而这里应描述人的感受，应该用过去分词stressed，表示“感到有压力的”。