Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words properly to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I love singing because music is my favorite hobby. In particular, I enjoy Bollywood songs, so I often sing them for fun.

제안: There are grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing in your answer. Use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, avoid filler words like 'well' and 'yeah' to sound more natural.

예시: I haven't had formal singing lessons, but I have watched some YouTube videos that teach singing techniques, which helped me improve.

제안: Your answer is a bit long and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences concise and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: I usually sing for my best friend because we both love Bollywood songs. She encourages me and says I have a good voice, which motivates me to keep singing.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains irrelevant information ('she really loves Vanessa'). Make sure your examples are relevant and your sentences are clear and grammatically correct.

예시: Yes, definitely. For me, music is like a happy pill. For example, when I sing for my best friend, she instantly feels happier.

× Yes, I do love singing because music is my favorite hobby and I love Bollywood songs, therefore I likes to sing those songs.

✓ Yes, I do love singing because music is my favorite hobby and I love Bollywood songs, therefore I like to sing those songs.

The verb 'like' should be in the base form 'like' when used with the subject 'I'. 'Likes' is used with third person singular subjects (he, she, it). Here, 'I' is the subject, so 'like' is correct.

× Well, not really because I haven't been tutored by anyone to sing, but yeah, I have saw some YouTube videos which showed how to sing and I referred those for my singing.

✓ Well, not really because I haven't been tutored by anyone to sing, but yeah, I have seen some YouTube videos which showed how to sing and I referred to those for my singing.

The present perfect tense requires the past participle form of the verb. 'Saw' is the simple past tense; the correct past participle is 'seen'. Also, the verb 'refer' when used in this context requires the preposition 'to' before the object.

× Well, not really because I haven't been tutored by anyone to sing, but yeah, I have saw some YouTube videos which showed how to sing and I referred those for my singing.

✓ Well, not really because I haven't been tutored by anyone to sing, but yeah, I have seen some YouTube videos which showed how to sing and I referred to those for my singing.

The verb 'refer' is commonly followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the source or object being referred. Omitting 'to' is incorrect in this context.

× Well, I usually sing for my best friend because she loves Bollywood songs, so do I and also she really encouraged me and motivates me that my voice is good and I'm a good singer.

✓ Well, I usually sing for my best friend because she loves Bollywood songs, so do I and also she really encourages me and motivates me that my voice is good and I'm a good singer.

The verb 'encourage' should agree with the third person singular subject 'she' in the present tense, so it should be 'encourages' instead of 'encouraged'. Also, the sentence mixes past and present tense; since 'motivates' is present tense, 'encourages' should also be present tense for consistency.