Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中多次将“singing”误说成“seeing”，影响了表达的准确性。建议注意发音和拼写，避免此类错误。同时，回答中句子结构不够完整，表达不够自然。可以尝试用更简洁且连贯的句子表达你的观点。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions. Whenever I feel sad or happy, singing allows me to share my feelings without speaking to others.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显重复，如“the way she or he sings”和“the way this person sings”意思重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复表达。

예시: No, I haven't formally learned to sing. However, I often imitate singers I admire by carefully listening to their voice and style, then trying to copy their techniques.

제안: 回答中“keep my feelings on the rug”表达不准确，应为“keep my feelings under the rug”或“keep my feelings inside”。建议注意固定搭配的使用，并尝试使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Firstly, I want to sing for myself because I tend to keep my feelings inside, so singing helps me express them. Then, I want to sing for my mom because she is the greatest mom in the world, and I love her very much.

제안: 同样存在“seeing”代替“singing”的错误，影响理解。建议注意发音和拼写。此外，句子结构可以更简洁，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Personally, I believe singing can bring happiness because music helps us connect with our emotions. For example, when I listen to an emotional song, I can feel the singer's feelings deeply, which makes me feel comforted and understood.

× I do like seeing because I think seeing is a way of express your emotions.

✓ I do like singing because I think singing is a way of expressing your emotions.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌。'express'应改为动名词形式'expressing'，因为前面有'way of'，后面应接动名词。

× Whenever I feel sorrow or happy, I can express my feeling by saying if I don't want to talk to people.

✓ Whenever I feel sorrowful or happy, I can express my feelings by singing if I don't want to talk to people.

'sorrow'应改为形容词形式'sorrowful'，'feeling'应为复数形式'feelings'，'by saying'应改为'by singing'，因为表达情感的方式是唱歌。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing before.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing before.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× If I like this person's voice or the way she or he sings, I will just observe it and try to copy the way this person sings.

✓ If I like this person's voice or the way she or he sings, I will just observe it and try to copy the way this person sings.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Firstly, I want to sing for myself because I'm a person who will keep my feelings on the rug, so I really need to express myself through singing.

✓ Firstly, I want to sing for myself because I'm a person who will keep my feelings under the rug, so I really need to express myself through singing.

习语是'keep feelings under the rug'，表示隐藏情感，'on the rug'是不正确的介词搭配。

× Personally, I believe seeing can bring happiness to people because music often helps us connect with our emotions.

✓ Personally, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music often helps us connect with our emotions.

'seeing'应为'singing'，因为主题是唱歌。