Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，如"seeing"应为"singing"，"sing song"表达不自然。建议注意单词拼写和语法，避免重复和冗余，回答时保持句子简洁且逻辑清晰。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget about daily stress. When I feel happy, I like to sing my favorite songs quickly, which makes me feel even better. Singing is a great way for me to express my emotions and have fun.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复，明确表达原因。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I am always busy with ice hockey practice, so I don't have time to learn something new.

제안: 回答中表达不够流畅，存在重复和语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，使用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: I don't usually sing for others because I don't think my singing skills are very good. However, I enjoy singing to myself because it makes me happy.

제안: 回答中有发音和拼写错误，如"saying"应为"singing"，"seeing"应为"singing"。建议注意发音和拼写，使用连词使表达更连贯。

예시: As I said, singing allows me to express my emotions and have fun. So definitely, singing can bring happiness and sometimes help people get out of a bad mood.

× Well, I really enjoy seeing because it helped me relax and forget about the stress from my daily life.

✓ Well, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget about the stress from my daily life.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌的。动词'enjoy'后面应接动名词形式。'helped'应改为现在时'helps'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× Sometimes when I feel happy, I like to sing my favorite song quickly which made me feel even better.

✓ Sometimes when I feel happy, I like to sing my favorite song quickly which makes me feel even better.

句中'made'应改为现在时'makes'，因为描述的是一般事实或习惯。

× Sing song is a great for me to express my emotion and have fun.

✓ Singing songs is great for me to express my emotions and have fun.

'Sing song'应为'singing songs'，表示唱歌的动作和复数形式。'a great'后缺少名词，改为'great'即可。'emotion'应为复数'emotions'，表示多种情感。

× No I never try to have a lessons for the singing because I have a ice hockey practice all the time so it make me so busy by the practice so I don't have more time to learn about a new.

✓ No, I never tried to have lessons for singing because I have ice hockey practice all the time, so it makes me so busy with the practice that I don't have more time to learn something new.

'never try'应为过去时'never tried'，因为谈论过去经历。'a lessons'应为'lessons'，复数且无冠词。'a ice hockey'应为'an ice hockey'。'make'应为第三人称单数'makes'。'by the practice'应为'with the practice'。'learn about a new'表达不正确，改为'learn something new'。

× Uh, I, I could say that I wouldn't sing to every everyone or a Pacific people who I want to sing because I don't think my, my singing skill is very good to sing to others, but I feel happy.

✓ Uh, I could say that I wouldn't sing to everyone or specific people I want to sing for because I don't think my singing skills are very good to sing to others, but I feel happy.

'every everyone'重复，应为'everyone'。'a Pacific people'应为'specific people'。'who I want to sing'应为'people I want to sing for'。'singing skill'应为复数'singing skills'。

× So then I sing, So I sing to myself.

✓ So then I sing. So I sing to myself.

两个句子之间应使用句号分开，避免重复使用连词。

× As I say, uh, saying can express my uh emotion and have fun.

✓ As I said, uh, singing can express my emotion and help me have fun.

'As I say'应为过去时'As I said'，因为指之前说过的话。'saying'应为'singing'，符合上下文。'have fun'前加'help me'使句子更完整。

× So definitely seeing can bring happiness and sometime it can bring someone out of the bad mood.

✓ So definitely singing can bring happiness and sometimes it can bring someone out of a bad mood.

'seeing'应为'singing'。'sometime'应为副词'sometimes'。'the bad mood'改为'a bad mood'更自然。