Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use correct grammar and link your ideas logically. For example, start by stating whether you like singing or not, then explain why with specific reasons.

예시: I don't usually like singing, but I really enjoy listening to music because it gives me energy and lifts my mood. I also like paying attention to the lyrics and learning about the singers who perform the songs.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Use past tense correctly and avoid repetition.

예시: When I was a child, I tried to learn how to sing, but I felt that I couldn't sing well. Therefore, I stopped trying to improve my singing skills.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear references.

예시: I don't usually like singing, but if I had to sing for someone, it would be my mother because she loves music. I would try to sing a song for her to show my appreciation.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to grammar and unclear phrasing. Use clear and simple sentences with linking words to explain your opinion. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music creates a joyful atmosphere. When people sing or listen to songs together, it helps them feel connected and enjoy themselves.

× Well basically are they really like music?

✓ Well basically I really like music.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'are they' instead of the correct subject pronoun 'I'. The sentence should express the student's own preference, so 'I' is appropriate here.

× I just love to listen music because it's give me energy and boost my stagnant.

✓ I just love to listen to music because it gives me energy and boosts my stamina.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'it's give' is incorrect; it should be 'it gives' to agree with the singular subject. 'Boost my stagnant' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'stamina'.

× because it's give me energy and boost my stagnant.

✓ because it gives me energy and boosts my stamina.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'it'. Therefore, 'give' should be 'gives' and 'boost' should be 'boosts'.

× I also keep interested to know about the lyrics of any particular song and which was sung by any specific singer.

✓ I am also interested in knowing the lyrics of any particular song that was sung by a specific singer.

The phrase 'keep interested to know' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'am interested in knowing'. Also, 'which was sung by any specific singer' should be 'that was sung by a specific singer' for clarity and correctness.

× Well, when I was a child that time I tried to sing a song but I think I cannot speak or sing nicely, so then I never try that.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I tried to sing a song but I think I could not speak or sing nicely, so I never tried that again.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Cannot' should be 'could not' to match past tense. 'Never try' should be 'never tried' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This is the examiner's question and is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Well, basically I don't like singing, I just try to listen song.

✓ Well, basically I don't like singing, I just try to listen to songs.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to generalize the statement.

× But if I try to sing for someone that will be my mother because she also loved music and sometimes he has a child.

✓ But if I try to sing for someone, it will be my mother because she also loves music and sometimes she takes care of a child.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect when referring to the mother; it should be 'she'. Also, 'loved' should be 'loves' to indicate present tense. The phrase 'sometimes he has a child' is unclear; it likely means 'sometimes she takes care of a child' or similar.

× So I can sing, I can sing someone song for her, for her.

✓ So I can sing, I can sing a song for her.

The phrase 'someone song' is incorrect; it should be 'a song'. Repetition of 'for her' is unnecessary.

× I will definitely try that.

✓ I will definitely try that.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Yes, definitely the music brought us in the situation where we can, where we can we in patience in a common environment and give us enjoy happiness, fun we can do with other people together when we're listening song.

✓ Yes, definitely music brings us to a situation where we can be patient in a common environment and enjoy happiness and fun together with other people when we listen to songs.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Brought us in the situation' should be 'brings us to a situation'. 'We can we in patience' is incorrect; it should be 'we can be patient'. 'Give us enjoy happiness, fun' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy happiness and fun'. 'Listening song' requires 'listening to songs'.

× Global music has a some kind of happiness.

✓ Global music has some kind of happiness.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'some kind of'. The correct phrase is 'some kind of happiness'.