Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、流畅，并修正语法错误。开头用一句主题句直接回答问题，然后用1–2句具体理由和例子支持，避免重复和犹豫词（如 umm）。注意动词时态和搭配，例如 say “I like singing and I often sing” 或 “singing helps me relax when I feel stressed”。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For example, after a long day at work I often sing for 10–15 minutes to unwind and forget about stress.

제안: 回答要更简洁并修正发音与拼写错误（如 hobby）。先直接回答，再给简短支持句说明程度或经历，避免重复短语。可以提到是否上过课、是否自学、或想否想学以丰富内容。

예시: No, I haven't had formal lessons; singing is just a hobby for me. I usually practice by watching online tutorials and singing along to my favorite songs.

제안: 回答时应先给出主题句，然后用少量具体细节说明原因或场合，避免罗列过多人群或重复，如“family and friends”。句子要更简洁并注意固定搭配（e.g., “perform for”）。

예시: I mainly like to sing for my family and close friends. I especially enjoy performing at family gatherings or birthday parties because they appreciate my effort.

제안: 保持肯定立场，然后用清晰的原因和具体例子支持观点，避免重复“feel”与犹豫词。使用连接词（for example, because）使逻辑更连贯。可提到音乐的情感效果或社交功能。

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing can lift people's mood because it releases tension and triggers happy memories. For example, singing a childhood song with friends often makes everyone smile and feel closer.

× Yes I like singing and I always singing umm I think singing is a way can make me relax and unwind when I feel stress stressful I'm singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing and I always sing. I think singing is a way that can make me relax and unwind when I feel stressed, so I sing.

句中“I always singing”使用了动词的 -ing 形式，但在一般现在时中应使用动词原形或第三人称单数形式（如 I always sing）。另外“when I feel stress stressful I'm singing”也有混乱：应使用形容词“stressed”来表示人的感受，并用简单现在时或进行短语“so I sing”来表达习惯性动作。建议：1) 对于习惯性或常态情况用一般现在时（I always + 动词原形）；2) 表示人感到“有压力”用“stressed”；3) 避免在一个句子中混用多种时态，保持时态一致。

× No singing is one of my hobbies I'm I'm not very professional about it and it just a Hobbit and.

✓ No. Singing is one of my hobbies. I'm not very professional at it and it's just a hobby.

原句中没有正确使用时态和动词搭配。“I'm not very professional about it”不合习惯，应为“professional at something”。“it just a Hobbit”拼写错误且缺少系动词，应为“it's just a hobby”。建议：1) 注意系动词（is/are/it's）；2) 常用搭配为“professional at”；3) 拼写检查“hobby”。

× Who do you want to sing for? / I want to sing for my parents, my cousins, my families and my friends, my classmates and so many people, and I will keep the best performance to sing.

✓ I want to sing for my parents, my cousins, my family, my friends, my classmates and many other people, and I will give my best performance when I sing.

原句中“my families”用法不当，family通常作为集合名词用单数形式；“so many people”在正式回答中可用“many other people”；“I will keep the best performance to sing”不符合英语习惯，应为“give my best performance when I sing”或“perform at my best”。建议：1) “family”通常不用复数；2) 常用搭配“give my best performance/perform at my best”；3) 注意介词和固定短语搭配。

× Yes, absolutely. Singing is a way that can umm, many people feel happiest and feel unwind. And when people think their favorite songs, umm they feel very happy and very excited.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Singing is a way that can make many people feel happiest and relaxed. When people think of their favorite songs, they feel very happy and excited.

句中“feel unwind”用法错误，应使用形容词“relaxed”或短语“feel relaxed”；“When people think their favorite songs”缺少介词“of”。此外“can umm, many people feel happiest”句子结构不完整，需加动词“make”。建议：1) 使用形容词描述感受（relaxed）而不是动词不定式或原形；2) 注意动词搭配“make someone feel ...”；3) 思考时使用“think of something”。