List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your ideas.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. This way, I can shop more efficiently and save money.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains unclear phrases like 'having a clean hand'. Try to use clearer expressions and provide specific examples. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organise my tasks and focus on the most important ones. For instance, by following my list, I can manage my time better and ensure I don't forget any deadlines.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'making at least' and 'hard to work'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Also, explain your ideas more fully with linking words.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and can be time-consuming. Additionally, the process might cause stress, making it harder for them to focus on their tasks.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions like 'I can have the best to be seen'. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words for coherence.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to carry and always with me. This way, I can access my list anytime and update it quickly, which is very convenient.

× When I shop I should know clearly what I should buy or what I shouldn't buy.

✓ When I shop, I must know clearly what I should buy or what I shouldn't buy.

The modal verb 'should' is used for advice or recommendation, but here the speaker means a necessity or obligation, so 'must' is more appropriate to express certainty about knowing what to buy.

× Having a clean hand, I can manage my time more effectively and avoid forgetting important duties.

✓ Having a clear plan, I can manage my time more effectively and avoid forgetting important duties.

The phrase 'having a clean hand' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'having a clear plan' or 'having a clear mind' to manage time effectively. The preposition and noun choice here are incorrect.

× Making at least can cost a lot of time and during the making people may feel stressed or hard to work, so they don't like making this.

✓ Making a list can take a lot of time, and during the process, people may feel stressed or find it hard to work, so they don't like making one.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues: 'making at least' is incorrect and should be 'making a list'; 'during the making' is awkward and should be 'during the process'; 'hard to work' is ungrammatical and should be 'find it hard to work'. The sentence needs rephrasing for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because phone is very convenient to carry out.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is very convenient to carry.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb ('to make'). Also, 'carry out' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'carry' when referring to taking something with you. Additionally, 'phone' needs the definite article 'the'.

× I can take my phone everywhere and things.

✓ I can take my phone everywhere with me.

The phrase 'and things' is incomplete and unclear. The sentence should clearly state that the phone can be taken everywhere, so 'with me' clarifies the meaning. The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity.

× I can take my list everywhere so I can have the best to be seen.

✓ I can take my list everywhere so I can always have it available to see.

The phrase 'have the best to be seen' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning is likely that the list is always accessible or visible. The sentence needs rephrasing for clarity and grammatical correctness.