List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and making the sentences more natural and concise. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details using linking words. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will help make your answer more effective.

예시: I think making a shopping list is very helpful because it helps us remember everything we need. However, I usually don't make a list myself; instead, I try to remember the items in my mind when I go shopping.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing due to unclear structure and repetition. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid unnecessary filler words and focus on clarity.

예시: I usually make lists for my work nowadays because it helps me remember all the tasks I need to complete. When I was a child, I didn't use lists, but now I find them very useful and convenient.

제안: Your answer is quite short and repetitive. To improve, provide more specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and try to expand your explanation.

예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and flexible. They don't want to restrict themselves with a fixed schedule, so they choose to go with the flow instead.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid awkward phrasing.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. In the past, people used paper lists since technology was not advanced, but nowadays, most people use their phones because they always have them with them.

× Well, it's a good idea to make a list as it is convenient way as we can remember all the things that we want in a shop but from but personally I do not make list, I just remember all the things in my mind and purchase it.

✓ Well, it's a good idea to make a list as it is a convenient way as we can remember all the things that we want in a shop but personally I do not make a list, I just remember all the things in my mind and purchase them.

The definite article 'a' is missing before 'convenient way' and 'list'. Also, 'purchase it' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so it should be 'purchase them'. Using the correct articles and pronouns improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× As far as I'm concerned, I do not make lists for work, but when I was a child, but nowadays I usually do make it as it is very good and convenient way to remember all the things and all the To Do List I have to do the work that has given to me. So yeah.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, I do not make lists for work, but when I was a child, I usually did. Nowadays, I usually do make them as it is a very good and convenient way to remember all the things and all the To Do lists I have to do the work that has been given to me. So yeah.

The sentence had missing articles before 'very good and convenient way' and incorrect pronoun usage 'make it' instead of 'make them' referring to lists. Also, 'To Do List' should be plural 'To Do lists' to match context. Correcting articles and pronouns clarifies meaning and maintains grammatical consistency.

× From my point of view, some people do not like making lists as they want to go with flow and don't want to make their schedule organized, so they go with flow and yes.

✓ From my point of view, some people do not like making lists as they want to go with the flow and don't want to make their schedule organized, so they go with the flow, and yes.

The phrase 'go with flow' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'flow'. The correct idiomatic expression is 'go with the flow'. Adding 'the' makes the phrase grammatically correct and idiomatic.

× Well, I like to make list on phone as it is a convenient way. In the past people used to make lists on the paper as there was not advanced technology. But nowadays I think all the people use this technology to make list as we can just read it anyway because phone is ourselves every time.

✓ Well, I like to make lists on the phone as it is a convenient way. In the past, people used to make lists on paper as there was no advanced technology. But nowadays, I think all people use this technology to make lists as we can just read them anyway because the phone is with us all the time.

Articles are missing before 'list', 'phone', and 'paper'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' to match plural usage. 'There was not advanced technology' should be 'there was no advanced technology'. 'Phone is ourselves every time' is incorrect; it should be 'the phone is with us all the time'. Correcting articles and prepositions improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.