List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意动词形式。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词单复数和时态问题，句子较短且缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并注意语法准确。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize tasks efficiently, so I can complete more work in less time.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当（如“Yulu”不明确），表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇并简洁表达观点。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and don't like planning ahead.

제안: 回答较为自然，但有小的语法错误和表达不够流畅，建议注意介词使用和句子连接，使表达更地道。

예시: Honestly, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can check them anytime and anywhere, whereas paper lists can easily get lost.

× Definitely, every time I go to shop I make a list before it's really helpful to prepare for the shopping and let me know what I need and avoid buy something I don't I don't need.

✓ Definitely, every time I go shopping I make a list before. It's really helpful to prepare for the shopping and lets me know what I need and avoid buying something I don't need.

动词go后面接动名词形式shopping，而不是不带-ing的shop。动词avoid后面应接动名词buying。这里需要用动名词形式表示动作。

× It help me work more rationally and efficiently.

✓ It helps me work more rationally and efficiently.

主语It是第三人称单数，谓语动词help应加-s变为helps，保持主谓一致。

× I can finish more job at short time.

✓ I can finish more jobs in a short time.

名词job应使用复数形式jobs，因为more表示数量增加。短语应为in a short time，表示在短时间内。

× Well, I haven't think about this question before, but I guess maybe make a list is kind of difficult for them because some people are just so Yulu and they do whatever whatever they want to do and they don't like to prepare.

✓ Well, I haven't thought about this question before, but I guess maybe making a list is kind of difficult for them because some people are just so lazy and they do whatever they want to do and they don't like to prepare.

现在完成时中think应使用过去分词thought。make a list应改为动名词making作主语。单词Yulu应为lazy，表示懒惰。

× Honestly, I prefer phone because it's more convenient and I can check with my list wherever and whenever I want, but if I make a list on the paper it's easy to get lost.

✓ Honestly, I prefer the phone because it's more convenient and I can check my list wherever and whenever I want, but if I make a list on paper it's easy to get lost.

prefer后面接名词时通常加定冠词the。check后不需要介词with。on the paper应改为on paper，表示用纸写的习惯用法。