List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并避免重复。

예시: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I often don't know exactly what I need to buy.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，时态使用不当，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确时态，并清晰说明情况。

예시: No, I don't have a job. But when I was studying, I made lists to keep track of my classes and assignments.

제안: 回答中充满犹豫和重复，表达不清晰。建议提前组织语言，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they are not sure what tasks they need to do at a certain time.

제안: 回答较为简单，表达不够自然，部分句子结构不正确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's easy to check my list anytime.

× No, I I did not make this one shop because I always don't know what what that I need to buy.

✓ No, I did not make a list when I shopped because I always don't know what I need to buy.

这里的错误是时态使用不当。原句中使用了“did not make this one shop”，表达不清且时态混乱。应使用过去时态表达过去的动作，同时“this one shop”应改为“a list when I shopped”，更符合语境。建议注意过去时态的正确使用。

× No I I don't work. I only make a list when I was studying because I have a lot of class I need to make a list to.

✓ No, I don't work. I only make a list when I am studying because I have a lot of classes and I need to make a list too.

这里存在时态不一致的问题。前半句是现在时，后半句却用了过去时“when I was studying”，应保持时态一致使用现在进行时“when I am studying”。另外，“class”应为复数“classes”，“to”应为“too”。建议注意时态一致和名词复数形式。

× Uh, because PE, uh, some people uh, don't have, uh, uh, clear clearly what they should do in that on that time.

✓ Uh, because some people don't clearly know what they should do at that time.

这里“clear clearly”重复且用词错误，应使用副词“clearly”修饰动词“know”。另外，“in that on that time”应改为“at that time”，介词使用错误。建议注意副词的正确使用和介词搭配。

× Uh, because PE, uh, some people uh, don't have, uh, uh, clear clearly what they should do in that on that time.

✓ Uh, because some people don't clearly know what they should do at that time.

介词使用错误，“in that on that time”应为“at that time”，表示具体时间点时用“at”。建议学习常用时间介词的正确用法。

× Mm-hmm. Yes, I make a list on my phone because I always use phones. So I can make a list on my phone that I can see it deeply.

✓ Yes, I make a list on my phone because I always use my phone. So I can make a list on my phone and see it clearly.

这里“phones”应为单数“my phone”，指代具体物品。句中“that I can see it deeply”中“it”多余且“deeply”用词不当，应改为“see it clearly”。建议注意代词的准确指代和副词的正确选择。