List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai như 'impuse' nên là 'impulse', 'random thing' nên là 'random things'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể hơn.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents impulse buying. Without a list, I might buy random items that I don't really need, which can be wasteful.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh dùng thành ngữ không phù hợp như 'feel on cloud 9' trong ngữ cảnh này. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning. It helps me stay focused on my tasks and I feel very satisfied when I complete everything on the list.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'feel less or blind' và 'don't want to stuck'. Bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I think it depends on their personality. Some people feel that making lists is a waste of time, or they prefer to be flexible because their plans often change.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'do something on a digital devices' và 'hold on my smartphone'. Bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone or laptop because it's more convenient and I don't have to carry a notebook. I can easily check my lists anytime on my devices.

× Without it I would buy random thing and maybe sometimes useful thing that it is quite useless.

✓ Without it I would buy random things and maybe sometimes useful things that are quite useless.

The nouns 'thing' should be pluralized to 'things' because the context implies multiple items, not just one. Using singular form here is incorrect when referring to multiple objects.

× I guess I make my To Do List every morning and I feel on cloud 9 when I take off all my to do lists.

✓ I guess I make my To Do List every morning and I feel on cloud 9 when I take off all my to-do list items.

The phrase 'to do lists' is inconsistent with 'my To Do List' (singular). It is better to say 'to-do list items' to refer to multiple tasks within one list, maintaining singular/plural consistency.

× Some people feel less or blind like a waste of time and maybe their plans always fall apart anyway or they don't want to stuck in a fixed plan.

✓ Some people feel lost or blind, like making a list is a waste of time, and maybe their plans always fall apart anyway or they don't want to be stuck in a fixed plan.

The words 'less' and 'blind' are incorrectly used here. The intended meaning is likely 'lost or blind' (figuratively). Also, 'don't want to stuck' should be 'don't want to be stuck' to use the correct verb form.

× I prefer to do something on a digital devices such as my or my laptop since it is more convenient and faster that I don't need to bring the note everywhere, but I need to hold on my smartphone and can see everything such as my test on it.

✓ I prefer to do things on digital devices such as my phone or my laptop since it is more convenient and faster because I don't need to bring a notebook everywhere, but I need to hold my smartphone and can see everything such as my tests on it.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'digital devices'; it should be 'on digital devices' without 'a'. Also, 'hold on my smartphone' should be 'hold my smartphone'. The phrase 'bring the note' should be 'bring a notebook' for clarity and correctness.