List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answerが少し不自然で、'because that is because'の部分は意味が不明瞭です。また、文法的な誤り（'I often forgot'は過去形でなく現在形の'I often forget'が適切）もあります。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、理由を明確にし、簡潔に述べることを意識しましょう。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I often forget what to buy or where to go. Making a list helps me stay organized and saves time.

제안: 文法的に少し不自然な部分があります（'a absent minded person'は誤りで、'an absent-minded person'が正しい）。また、文が長く繋がっているため、適切な接続詞を使い、文を分けて明確にしましょう。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because I am an absent-minded person. I often forget tasks or appointments, so making a list is necessary and it helps me a lot.

제안: 答えが少し曖昧で、'I guess'や'Oh well'が多用されているため、確信を持って話す練習が必要です。また、'they're they have good memory'は文法的に誤りです。より明確で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

예시: In my opinion, some people find making lists bothersome. Also, they may have a good memory, so they don't feel the need to write things down.

제안: 答えが不明瞭で、'if you ride on, you need to. Look at phones when you check it'の部分は意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、文法的に正しい文章を作る練習が必要です。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because when I am on the move, it's easier to glance at a paper list than to unlock and check my phone.

× I often forgot what to buy or where to go, so if I don't make a list it's very convenient.

✓ I often forget what to buy or where to go, so if I don't make a list it's very inconvenient.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used. Also, the phrase 'it's very convenient' contradicts the context; it should be 'inconvenient' to express the problem of not making a list.

× because I'm a absent minded person and I often forget what to do or where to go so it's necessary to make a list when I'm working and it helps me a lot.

✓ because I'm an absent-minded person and I often forget what to do or where to go, so it's necessary to make a list when I'm working and it helps me a lot.

The article 'a' is incorrect before a vowel sound; it should be 'an'. Also, 'absent minded' should be hyphenated as 'absent-minded' when used as an adjective.

× Oh well, in my opinion I guess it's very bothersome and I guess they're they have good memory to memorize those tasks so they just don't need a list.

✓ Oh well, in my opinion, I guess it's very bothersome and I guess they have a good memory to remember those tasks, so they just don't need a list.

The phrase 'they're they have' is incorrect; it should be 'they have'. Also, 'good memory to memorize' is redundant; 'good memory to remember' is more appropriate.

× Well, I'm keen on writing on papers that is because if you ride on, you need to. Look at phones when you check it and I prefer papers.

✓ Well, I'm keen on writing on paper; that is because if you ride on, you need to look at your phone when you check it, and I prefer paper.

The phrase 'writing on papers' is incorrect; 'writing on paper' is the correct expression. Also, 'look at phones' should be 'look at your phone' for clarity and correctness. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity.