List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but needs to be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'to buy' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, we always make a list before shopping, especially when we go to Mark Mart. My mother prepares the list to decide what to buy and what not to buy, so it helps us shop efficiently and save time.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases and repetition. Try to use clearer expressions and organize your ideas logically with linking words like 'first', 'then', and 'finally'. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list at the start of my day. First, I complete the easy tasks, then I move on to the harder ones. This method helps me finish my work on time effectively.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and lacks coherence. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' properly. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'I think'.

예시: I believe some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. For example, they remember what to buy and go directly to the shops without needing a list.

제안: Your answer has good content but is a bit confusing due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to organize your answer clearly and use linking words like 'however' to show contrast. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. However, sometimes I write lists on paper when my mother asks me to note down groceries.

× Yes, we always make sure to make a list when we go to the Mark Mart or any shop like to buy some fruits to buy a groceries at my home.

✓ Yes, we always make sure to make a list when we go to Mark Mart or any shop to buy some fruits or groceries for my home.

The phrase 'a groceries' is incorrect because 'groceries' is a plural noun and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'like to buy some fruits to buy a groceries' is redundant and unclear. It is better to say 'to buy some fruits or groceries'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× So my mother always prepare a list to what to buy and what not to buy.

✓ So my mother always prepares a list of what to buy and what not to buy.

The verb 'prepare' should be in the third person singular form 'prepares' to agree with the singular subject 'my mother'. Also, the phrase 'prepare a list to what to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'prepares a list of what to buy'. This correction addresses subject-verb agreement and correct preposition usage.

× So it's easy for us to understand and go directly there from the shop.

✓ So it's easy for us to understand and go directly to the shop.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate direction towards a place is 'to'. Hence, 'go directly there from the shop' should be 'go directly to the shop' for proper meaning and grammar.

× Yes, of course. Whenever I start my day, I make a list to do to do work that called.

✓ Yes, of course. Whenever I start my day, I make a to-do list for my work.

The original sentence is confusing and contains repetition ('to do to do') and unclear phrasing ('work that called'). The corrected sentence uses the common phrase 'to-do list' and clarifies the meaning, improving sentence structure and clarity.

× So when I start my work, I start with the task one and the easy task and then I move to the hard task and I make sure to complete this task on time.

✓ So when I start my work, I start with task one and the easy tasks, then I move to the hard tasks and make sure to complete these tasks on time.

The sentence mixes singular and plural forms inconsistently. 'Task one' is singular, but 'the easy task' and 'the hard task' should be plural ('easy tasks', 'hard tasks') to match the context of multiple tasks. Also, 'this task' should be 'these tasks' to agree with the plural subject. This correction ensures proper singular/plural agreement.

× I think it's your own choice and I think it's your brain works how your brain works.

✓ I think it's your own choice and how your brain works.

The phrase 'it's your brain works how your brain works' is grammatically incorrect and redundant. The corrected sentence removes unnecessary repetition and uses correct pronoun and clause structure for clarity.

× For example, those people I think not to forget what to buy and move directly to the shop where they need.

✓ For example, I think those people do not forget what to buy and move directly to the shop they need.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary prepositions. 'Not to forget' should be 'do not forget' for proper negation. Also, 'to the shop where they need' is awkward; 'the shop they need' is clearer. This correction improves sentence structure and preposition use.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone, but sometimes it's on the paper when my mother said write something about the groceries, so I prefer the paper on that time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone, but sometimes I use paper when my mother asks me to write something about the groceries, so I prefer paper at that time.

The phrase 'it's on the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'I use paper'. Also, 'my mother said write something' should be 'my mother asks me to write something'. The preposition 'on that time' is incorrect; it should be 'at that time'. These corrections fix preposition and verb usage errors.

× But I really prefer to check my phone and prepare a list on my phone because I carry all this my phone for example some.

✓ But I really prefer to check my phone and prepare a list on it because I always carry my phone with me, for example.

The phrase 'carry all this my phone' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'carry my phone with me'. Also, 'on my phone' can be replaced with 'on it' to avoid repetition. This correction improves pronoun use and sentence clarity.