List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same point in different ways.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Otherwise, I often forget items and have to return to the supermarket, which wastes time.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to explain the effect of making lists. Also, try to correct grammar and sentence structure for better clarity.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work as a student. I usually prepare it at the start of the day or the day before, so I can keep track of what tasks I have completed and what still needs to be done.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some repetition. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons logically.

예시: Some people avoid making lists because they feel it wastes time or they believe they can remember everything. However, I think making lists is helpful because I often forget things otherwise.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, avoid repeating words and try to be more concise.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper when I have free time because it's more comfortable. However, if I'm busy or in an emergency, I use my phone to quickly note down important things.

× List helps me to keep in mind that what things I have to purchase when I don't list the items I use, I need to buy.

✓ Lists help me to keep in mind what things I have to purchase; when I don't list the items I use, I need to buy them.

The word 'List' should be plural 'Lists' because it refers to the general concept of making lists. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Most of the time I forget one of these and it causes a problem for me that afterwards I have to go to the supermarket again for purchasing.

✓ Most of the time I forget one of these, and it causes a problem for me because afterwards I have to go to the supermarket again to purchase it.

The phrase 'for purchasing' is incorrect; it should be 'to purchase'. Also, adding 'because' improves sentence flow and clarity.

× I usually don't work in offices but as a student I have to do things which I in a day and for that I make list in the starting or the day prior to it.

✓ I usually don't work in offices, but as a student, I have to do things each day, and for that, I make a list at the start or the day prior to it.

The phrase 'make list' should be 'make a list' to include the article. Also, 'which I in a day' is unclear and corrected to 'things each day' for clarity.

× It helps me to remember what all things are left and what all things are I have done.

✓ It helps me to remember which things are left and which things I have done.

The phrase 'what all things' is incorrect; 'which things' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× People don't make list as they are lazy or they thinks that the making a list is a waste of time.

✓ People don't make lists because they are lazy or they think that making a list is a waste of time.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the plural subject 'People'. Also, 'thinks' should be 'think' to agree with the plural subject 'they'.

× People don't make list as they are lazy or they thinks that the making a list is a waste of time.

✓ People don't make lists because they are lazy or they think that making a list is a waste of time.

The verb 'thinks' is incorrect for the plural subject 'they'; it should be 'think'.

× And I don't think I don't think it is a good way of doing because I will tell you mine.

✓ And I don't think it is a good way of doing things because I will tell you mine.

The sentence has a repeated phrase 'I don't think'. Removing the repetition improves clarity and correctness.

× I usually forget things that's why make.

✓ I usually forget things; that's why I make lists.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'I make lists' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Actually making list on a paper and a phone is a situation based things.

✓ Actually, making lists on paper and on a phone depends on the situation.

The phrase 'making list on a paper and a phone' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists on paper and on a phone'. Also, 'situation based things' is corrected to 'depends on the situation' for clarity.

× But when I'm busy and and it's an important and it's an emergency or such kind of things that I need to make a list at that time, I prefer on phone.

✓ But when I'm busy and it's important or an emergency, or such kinds of things that I need to make a list at that time, I prefer to use my phone.

The phrase 'prefer on phone' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to use my phone'. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.